All Comments on 'Prison Break & Storm'

I know multiple character stories are hard to write so I’ll give you some slack there. It just seemed rushed from the get go. And how did I know that the white women would just love being raped by the black guys....hmmm. And that the mother would get off seeing her daughter violated.

And what was up with all the stats?

Other than Steve being "morphed" into Sam, I found this an interesting read. I recommend (1) more round of proofing before submitting what I hope is a sequel!

Ann should not be surprised...Like Mother Like Daughter LOL

Yor stories are absolutely wonderful. I look froward to when you add a new story. Please keep writing! Would love to hear from you sometime about where you get your ideas.

I just couldn't finish the story..sorry but it was horrible..better luck next time..work on your characters and how you describe 'em...the beginning bored me and by the time they have the women i was just not impressed enough to continue...

It was good but give us more raunchy nasty sex. I love most of your stories.

My eyes hurt because I don't think I even blinked reading this story! Very well writen, and perfectly executed. A+++

I just loved the way you took the story and made it work for me. I got so wet reading it !!!!!

Not real enought

Just bad

...in 95% of cases like this people aren't going to go from 'I'm about to die!!' to 'Hmmm, sucking this titty is pleasant...' in an instant. Not believable to me at all

2 stars

love it but I was hoping for a different ending I thought when the husband got there you might let the mother and daughter have revenge with Linda that would have been so hot if the two of them made Linda go down on them