All Comments on 'Private Self Ch. 01'

If this is your first attempt at a story, all I can say is wow, great job! Hopefully you have more ideas in mind!

I love the way this is going. You’ve set up the storyline perfectly. I hope Ms C. thoroughly corrupts Ryan and they have really filthy sex soon.

Glad you got your release. Lovely description. I wonder where this series will go....

Great job :-)

Thanks for the encouraging words, readers!

I know I have a lot to learn...

Great job on your first submission. You have set the stage really well and have left me thinking about where you are going to take it. I look forward to the next installment, and, hopefully, to many more stories to come.

I do hope you will continue to write of your private self. Writing, is very much like a performance art in that the creator/performer must be willing to establish an intimacy of self with the reader/audience if the story/performance is to resonate at a level which captivates. A great difficulty with writing on a venue such as Literotica is maintaining your balance as a writer of erotica. It's a bit of a Yin-Yang dichotomy between literary achievement and capitulation to the siren song of porn. They are both very important elements to good writing. If this first chapter is an indication, I think you have very good prospects of wowing your audience.

Brava

Well written. Your emotions and passions come through strongly making this more than just another formulaic sex description. Can’t wait to read Part 2!

Thank you for reading Private Self Ch. 1! (Edited version is pending; same story but with improvements from lit writers' feedback.)

Also, thank you to members who have commented with encouragement, and those who are following me! :heart:

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Private Self Ch. 2 is now available to read @

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Chapter 3 coming soon!

- Lusty

I thought your buildup and descriptions were fantastic! Almost came with you, naughty lady!