All Comments on 'Problem Child'

by TonyMA70

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Nice story , but...

The premise is hot, the storyline a good one. But please, work on your writing skills! Very stilted and un-natural narration.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Translated From...?

Let me guess... originally written in Polish, translated into Chinese, then into German, German to Samoan, Chinese again, and then into something that was supposed to be English.

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