by principessa07
I like the way you let the tension build. Too many writers get to sex in the first 5 minutes of a relationship, but this was very believable.
Another great job, by a ghifted writer! Passion chemistry and hot sex!
Wonderful!
One can tell you have been writing for ages....great development, perfect grammar, syntax and spelling .... Can you make this a Chapter 1, and allow yourself to progressively take Kate into wilder scenarios?? PLEASE keep writing!!