All Comments on 'Prom Night'

Great story. Needs to add Sally to the mix to be perfect!

I love these stories The Father/Daughter are so great. I especially love anything with out protection and impregnation keep this stuff your story is great lets see some more

You have always known how to write great stories. I love everyone You write. As for the asshole that put down on Your spelling why don't you go find something better to do than put down on people's spelling. He did a dam good job at it. If You only read stoies for the spelling then it is time for you to stop reading. You miss the hold dam point of it. L.W. don't worry about assholes like that. Just keep up the great work. Hi after all who has His first book out? No that one. Great story MY friend.

You know that I have read all your stories,that you have put out. And it seems that I have read this one befor, but it was still good to read it again. so keep up the good work popeye.... and you know who it is lol

Hi,

I don't know what's going on. This is an old story. Thanks for your great comments, not the asshole at the bottom. Thank you all.

Don't stop now!!! I'm sure you can think of more to write. Great story

Well!! That is a GREAT story!! Emm its one of my favorites! Read it and reread it many many times..does that make me a groupie? :P Anyway! You should keep writing..more and more!! Good luck with any future stories!

Your editor for one! Cleaned up, this is one hell of a hot fucking story. Your dad is one sick daughter fucker, but then you know that. The story is worth considering a sequel.

wheres the sequel i loved it

WET! WET! WET! Those 3 words sum it up! Can't wait to read more from you.

This HOT story had me with just the father and daughter...it did not need additional characters. I am so wet -- I wish I had a 10 inch Daddy-cock to ride! I am dying to read more of this author's incest stories. I adore daddy/daughter love.

That was amazing. Especially the way the 'Daddy' had little catch phrases when he punched punks in the face. It's like he's a fucking super-hero.

Needs a little more detail, draw it out a little! But it was moving. Stopped to abruptly so keep up the writing.

I really enjoyed this story.. I don't think you needed to add any more characters but it was still hot!!!! Was wet the whole time...

Thats how many times I came. wow.

Nice job, hon. And I loved seeing him beat up those assholes who tried to rape her.

redneck fantasy.

Really had fun reading the story!! Hell, I wish all the girls that posted below lived close to me so I could play their daddy for them, hehehe, talk about some steamed up girlies ;)

Yeah, the story could use some editor lovin', strange punctuation, phrases etc, but overall it was a blast! Thanks!!

I took my daughter's virginity on her 18 th birthday and got her pregnant and that's as it should be a daughter's pussy belongs to her daddy 1st.

He should have been with the daughter only. Now she needs to have sex with his friends so he can be jealous.

Feels like the story ended just as it was really getting going. Could be the start of a harem with her daddy and her friends. Oh well.

Simple and sweet STORY IS GREAT. I really really love it.