All Comments on 'Prototype F-96 Pt. 02'

Hot, original, great pace. Keep up the good work!

glad I came across this story... I hope to return to more chapters soon

"some people were requesting incest, i will not be involving any in future stories because i personally don't like it at all."

Guess I won't be reading any further chapters then.

That's a new one. Someone who won't read a good story because it DOESN"T have incest. Takes all types I suppose.

Enjoyed the freshness of your stories as well as the novelty. Your readers were treated to the same surprise as your main character.... namely, Wow this thing really does something fun. Please continue to write, your style is refreshing and exciting.

To the Incest lover,

The story is in the "Mind Control' section, I think you want the "Incest/Taboo stories" section. I like mind control stories and trying to develop one. I like incest also but will read ALL stories that interest me.

To Nemohoes, love the way your story is developing. Keep them short and erotic. Extra long stories make me skip through trying to hold my interest. Ready for the next part!

Do you plan to make it like a harem story?

I don't know, should I? Any suggestions are welcome.

Yeah. It's so much better without the incest. Your character doesn't seem the type to turn the remote on his family. As far as Harem goes. That's a good way to take it, after all you already stated that even after the use of the remote the "Subjects" still want him.

What would happen if the remote was turned on a guy?

Incredibly hot

i agree with the others, making it a harem story would be really sexy. Since you have said you don't care for incest it could give him a way to move out and continue to enjoy the women he came across. Maybe he could move in with one of them down the line.

His mother

.....and fun, in a high school sort of way....but that's where we have the most rampant sexual fantasies, isn't it?

Keep going!

one of many was skinny fat body shape, what the fuck is that? I like lactation stories and mind control but please make an effort or get an editor. this section always needs cool ideas like this but quality writers even ,ore. thanks