All Comments on 'Pt 2: The First Fuck'

Yet another pair of idiots. Why are they married?

Again... very straight forward. No relationship games, just sex.

In its way... pure.

It's great!

Very hot and sexy! I think I am going to have the wife do this in our driveway!

Very descriptive

"wait till you hear what I did the very next night!"... Please don't bore us more!

Again, wrong category.

Fetish is where this goes.

Talk about fucked up. And they let people like those described breed. Scary.

Ditch the condom!

garbage 1*

Great story. I like that your husband could hear but not see. That sort of arousal really helps. But he should be careful, if he gets off listening and cums, he might start regretting what you are doing just a little ways away.

I can't wait to hear the next chapter.

To the first comment! Why are you reading cuckold & wife stories!! That was a good tale probably from experience and I enjoyed it!!!!

Love everything except the condom use. I wish the hotwife used other methods of birth control that allowed for bare back fucking. Condoms in erotic fiction are a complete turnoff for me.

Fun story.. sounds real… I notice that all the negative comments are from someone called Anonymous.

The really sad thing is you have kids. That is definitely a problem for fucked up cunts like you. I guess you will pass on fucked up cheating genes you passed onto your kids. When they become old enough you will cheer them on to cheat on thier partners. You can show them how to do it. Then your whole family can join in.

Hey Bogey3 aren't you also anonymous. Is your real name Bogey3? Fuck off idiot.

re: Bogey3 Says the guy who doesn't allow comments on his stories. Checking them over, I understand why.

1*- nothing more needs to be said. Yep, just another anonymous like all you idiots.

What will your kids think about mommy whore and daddy cuck when some kid at school shows them your videos.

He told me that "he just listens." Why would the boyfriend say, "he" when talking about himself? He wouldn't. He'd say, "I just listen". My point being that this story badly needed an editing for this, and so many other errors, which made the story distracting. Please keep writing, but please find yourself an editor. Thanks!

Nice story. I was always surprised how inattentive most men are when they have sex. Quit being a selfish prick and she’ll love you for it. There is nothing like the power and satisfaction you feel to watching and feeling a woman orgasm. That’s your job, if you can’t do that for her what purpose do you have. That being said I don’t use condoms, ever, and I don’t pull out. That’s my reward.

This is definitely in the heavily cuckhold category. Hubby obviously gets off on being treated this way and you adore being fucked by others and then regaling the story to hubby. Therefore the story is doing exactly what to says. The chapters are very short and maybe don’t go into enough detail to explain fully the dynamic of why this situation works for these two, hence all the negative comments. To me, reading a story from the LE section I know exactly, or at least roughly, what I’m going to get and this is no exception. Heaven knows why people read these stories and then complain about the overall content and general premise of what is being told!