All Comments on 'Pulled Back from Cliff's Edge'

I LIKE YOUR WRITING BUT YOU LEAVE A MYSTERY ; WHY DID HE STOP HALF WAY ?

HUHHHHHHHHH

What kind of ending is that,Did you do it to get things kind of replies

I just don't get it the dad had sex in sight but didn't do anything. Was he waiting for the breasts to grow some more?

Hey u had an excellent starting but u messed it up by a very old fashioned ending could have been better if the story would have been longer

The basic story was ok... but the writing wasn't very good, making a bit difficult to read. I managed stay with it to see what the daughter would do.... but wait, a crappy ending ruined that too. Give it up.

definitely the only story of its kind on literotica. i've been reading for a long time, and i never though i'd see the day that someone would write a story with charachters that follow morals more than desires. i truly am amazed at this story. but don't do it again. blue balls makes anyone go crazy and i don't think i could take two stories like this one =D

Nice story, keep it up.

what the hell?! why?? why?? WHY?!?

Brilliant. A thoughtful story and then these poor baying curs who lambaste you for wasting their time really where like the cherry on top. Great! The real asshole is the one calling you an asshole. His asshole is so big it's displaced his brain.

Ends terrible. What a waste of time.