All Comments on 'Punished by Mother, Sister and Wife Ch. 04'

I have been following this story since the first chapter and I love the way the mom and sister are both on his side privately, but both ready to punish him when they are together. I'm hoping the wife gets involved soon, then I bet we'll see some fireworks. This is a good story for us ladies because it has more than just the quick and dirty dialogue most stories seem to have. I'll be watching for more. I would like to see him spanked, though. Not severely, but in a very humiliating way that exposes him and makes him vulnerablle.

The two of you are doing a great job on this story - I'm checking two or three times a day to see if there has been another installment. More please!

I''m tenting and nearly spurted in my training panties, LOL! :)

Please hurry with next chapter I am sure he in for one long day of elephant balls before he is relief

Both heroines don't want the other to know about their attraction to Toms cock...lucky Tom

This is a FANTASTIC story! Please finish it for us! Please!

Excellent......! Keep writing a few more chapters.

Awesome story. More of this great humiliation. Cute party dresses and mary janes with frilly ankle socks would be awesome.

Damn this story is so fucking hot! I'm on edge and want more! I almost don't want Beth to take him back because the games they are playing with him and there is the taboo of incest too. But I see the cuckhold coming, I rather see Beth toy with him like Mom and Cassie, but whatever keep this going!

Please write more. The humiliation is amazing and the story has so many possibilities. All 3 women in his life punishing him together has so much potential.

This is such a wonderful story, it is a real shame you have left your characters in limbo. There was so much potential with them and you left so many things unanswered. It really isn't fair to your readers to leave it like this.

I think the title of this comment says it all. I am actually interested in the characters and what happens next. I am left in limbo. Just as "Tom" is a good storyteller, so are the both of you. Please finish the story for the sake of your readers.

Thanks.

This story is really well done and very stimulating. How can you leave your readers waiting like this? Please, please come back to this family and give us more!

I have to agree with all the readers comments. Please keep it cuming. I love the characters and you write extremly well. There are so many directions you can take this story. I/we will all be waiting with titilaiting breath.

I agree with the other comments, that you should continue this story. I have really gotten into it and see that the both of you and "Tom" have a story telling skill. I do hope that you will pick up this story again.

More more! keep going! your so skilled!

of bitches. The sadistic, manipulative women are the ones that need punishing. Pretty sick behavior on their parts to treat him in this manner. Makes me wonder if they all suffer from the same mental disorder.

It sucks and that isn't intended as a pun. You really think, that even in a fantasy, that a man would put up with this level of disrespect for even a minute? Disown the Mother and Sister and divorce the wife and be done with the manipulative bitches.

Hi. I'm loving your story. Please please continue as this story is so very close to home for me.

Lisa x

I have just finished reading the four chapters and I am now disappointed in not finding a chapter five. Please finish this story. I am waiting in my training bra and panties for a final conclusion.

I have to say I'm glad you stopped writing.

His wife should come over and all three of them should milk him and then punish him. Not just a soft spanking, but a real hard punishment with him going over each of their laps for a hard hand spanking and then being tied to the table and whipped by his mother with a belt until his butt is sore and red with white blisters forming in spots until he is crying really hard and apologizes to them. Afterwards they sooth him by rubbing cream on his ass cheeks and tell him that they plan to act out all of his stories. That's what he wants, deserves, and needs.

Abuse, torture and humiliate them until they snap and kill you and any others in their path. Glad this never continued

Oh come you can't stop now is starting to get real good please continue this.

I hope you find the time to continue this hot story.

I check back from time to time, maybe I won't check back for 6 months and then will just quit looking.

I just wrote a comment about my mom, mother in law and wife and what they plan for me. Thei did try the milking to make me stop masturbating and the first time I could not get a hard on for almost a week but as time went by I must have started making more cum because within a month I was back to masturbating multiple times a day, that is when they started planing my operation. at first they were going to make me have a vagina but now they plan somthing much worse. they found a doctor in Mexico who will move my balls up into my body then skin my uritha out of my penis and sow my uritha under a flap of skin from my sack. I will not have a penis or vagina and will be smooth and have to sit to pee but my balls will be making testerone and he told them I will be horny as hell but will not have a way to get off unless someone masages my prostate and then the cum will leak out of my new uretha opening. I have tried but can not stop so soon I will be a "IT". My mother tried to make me stop masturbating as a teen but nothing worked. I am home alone and masturbating as I write this.

It's a great story, please find some time to finish it.

hope to see another chapter, in which, the wife is divorced, and his personal property is returned. even though his mom and sister found out all his secrets the wrong way. why would you go back to that wife? you know what kind of damage she could do to you. live happily ever after with your mom and sister, or until you can find a trustworthy woman, and good luck on that.

Please ..... We really need the conclusion. Love your writing - Thanks

Iwas dissapointed that you have not continued this series i look forward to more chapters

Do you ever finish ANYTHING?

i am looking forward to any stories that i hope will soon follow and end this seriesl. i feel as though we the readers are the ones being punished, we NEED more. i am beginning to wish i could be punished like this, but as they say, you cant really punish the willing, and as i am typing this, i am standing in my own very sexy tiny gstring, with lace top fish net thigh highs, under a very short, very slutty silver skirt, and 6 inch platform stilettoe heels. wishing i could get "punished" like this!

But you can't leave the story this way. It's a crime. It's now when we hope the best. Your readers are hotter than your characters. We need much more. So please ...

Great story, was able to feel the situation! Please finish!

This has been a fantastic series so far. Please keep up the great work.

Wow awesome! I'm sitting here dribbling in my silky panties,camisole,silky robe and snake skin thigh high bitch boots! Please give us more and please,please,please have the Mother and Daughter make him horny by tongue kissing each other and licking each other's juicy wet pussy,please??? So very hard and horny keep up the good work!! Xoxox

Ciao bellissimo racconto c’è il continuo

I can't wait to see more of this story completed. I have to admit that I have had similar thoughts and feelings.

is there more? or is it title by a other name?

Please continue this story it a work of art. I want to know about his mairreg his wife and his relationship with all three women now.

very good story

Wow...we really need more of this. Fantastic story.

It's a literotica tragedy that this story remains unfinished.

Omg this story was fantastic probably the best I've ever read

that's the way you leave us hanging since 2010!!!!!!!! Never finishing the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Noooooooo!!! We gotta know what happens! This was pure gold and now it's pure torture!!

Please come back to this!

Damn, I wish this story was still being worked on. I really enjoyed the first 4 chapters.

Very funny and entertaining fantasy. I have several question; How many stories has he written? So what happens when his wife, mother and sister run out of these stories? Will they invent new ones? Make him write more, that is very possible. However; you can only repeat subjects so many times. I say it goes for about 3 to 5 more chapters till subjects begin to repeat. You started back up in 2022 good. Please continue. End the series when you come up with a reasonable conclusion.