All Comments on 'Punishing The Unruly Son Ch. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Perfect!!!!

I've been following this story for days now. As a woman with a grown son and daughter, this story has been a treasure to find and read. I especially like the tenderness playing out between them all. Thank you, it's perfect.

mel_pomenemel_pomeneover 12 years ago
Bobby's exquisite humilation continues ...

... and increases in severity with each new chapter! He is going to have a completely new outlook on everything before this week of torment ends for him!

Assuming, of course, that his Mother and sister don't decide they prefer to keep him just as he is!

A marvellous, well-told and extremely satisfying story; I look forward to reading even more of Bobby's discomfiture at the hands of these two wonderful women - five stars and my thanks yet again!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great story

Hope he gets a strap on from his mom or sister. Love the writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Getting Boring Now

You are dragging this story out too much. Six chapters, and we are still on day one. Pity, as it had the capability of being a good story at first. Now it is getting boring.

Flymaster60Flymaster60almost 12 years ago
nicely done

i love the detail of the first day, really sets up for whats coming next. the rebonding between brother really sister really makes this a heartwarmer. when the family is put back together as a unit it will be so strong that nothing could between them

jane marwoodjane marwoodover 11 years ago
Excellent

5***** Lovely

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbimanover 2 years ago

slow no real punishment good idea, story line though

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