All Comments on 'Pure Bliss'

Every womans first time should be like this. Cant wait to read more of your stuff

This was so well written. I really enjoyed the way you developed the story and the characters. It was very erotic. i will read it again someday. Jan

Did he take and not be her first ? Reading how he worried about his size, while it appeared she was seemingly comparing his size, or so it seemed. The manner in which she was climaxing didn't at first appear she was getting her gun, but again I considered she was faking or something. I keep reading where the virgins all say, 'fuck me' yet in my experiences it took several times for the girl who gave me her virginity to utter the term fuck. Oh well, I wasn't impressed with this story.

Enjoyed your way with words but as I noted in the title above, the sex seemed staged by both parties. Other than that, it came across nicely.

As a woman i thought that was5 stsr right up until tje weird crying shyt at the end. what a turn off after all that amazing build up.

definitelt dropped a star or two for the creepy ending.