All Comments on 'Pure Heart Pt. 03'

Very enjoyable. The story just keeps getting better and better. I like the fact that it all seems plausible.

Brilliant! This story is well-paced and well-written. A few typos that should have been caught, but did not detract from the story's overall quality.

Keep writing.

I love what you have written and am still staying with you.

Keep writing.

I love what you have written and am still staying with you.

Keep writing.

worth the wait, by a LONG shot. I'm interested where we'll be going with this "girl-friend" twist. Perhaps a break-up and then it'll be up to dear sister to reconcile her brother?

Keep up the good work. This is a great story.

Fantastic story , well detailed and not far aetched . We need much more of this duo .

I wish my sister was like that.

Good god man, you have a rare gift. Your characters are so damn real I feel like I've met them. The sexual tension is killing me. You have a simple story line that is unfolding beautifully. THIS is how it's done. No overworked plots. No overstaffed casts. Just 2 (Okay, kinda 3) people whose needs, hopes, and fears are being painted by a skilled artist. I need a drink and a cigarette.

You're not just a good writer; hell, you're not just a great writer. Your writing ability is phenomenal. You are one of the best on this site. Your stories are epic, realistic, and very satisfying, both in a sexual and a romantic sense. You give your characters personalities that most writers blatantly forget to add. I can feel every emotion the protagonist feels. Simply amazing. "Our Shared Bathroom" was incredible, and this is an outstanding follow-up in your works.

I have to say this is the best submission of this type (without intercourse) I've ever read, and easily one of my favorites on this entire site! Please, keep this story going, it's phenomenal! Great Job!!

You are without a doubt the best writer in existence, your stories are so real and so deep. Excellent work, keep it up ^^

Cant wait until the next chapter

the whole series is a bit strange why does the sister even care that he was addicted to porn she may have got him off that but now he seems hooked on her and neither of them seem to be thinking what tanya might think if and when she finds out or thier parents whats the difference if he's jacking off to porn or her nude body the parents and tanya would more easily accept porn than incest and how will the sister feel if he and tanya start haveing sex or get married and he no longer needs her looks like a lot of problems ahead she would have been better off keeping her nose out of his business

This was the best story Ive ever read. U have no idea how many times I got off to this. I cant wait until the next chapter.

You are the best author on this site...I can't wait until the next chapter...Kepp it up

Wow! You seriously know how to make one fanticise... You are by far the best writer in this website!!! I think anyone would love to be in alex's position! keep up the good work!

I cant wait anymore. you got me hooked lol I cant come anymore. lmao. Please fuck her she wants it stop being a punk. You guys already past the point of brother and sister so damn it fuck her.

Simply. Awesome.

Not more words are needed I'm afraid.

This is my favorite story on Literotica, Well written, well told. Thank you, give us more!

I'm hooked. Hope to read the next parts asap.

You do write very well but you have to keep it real.

The steps you're taking to get to the next stage are too small and filled with waffle.

We've waited long enough!

I have only just read your stories i am hooked as well please continue writing they way you have been it is intertaining and more interesting then slap bang thank you ma'am, hopefully you will write soon, i look very much forward to reading more on that series. Thank You

When I first started reading this I wasnt expecting such a good story!

I like how you at least put a plot into it instead of just writing sex after sex after sex

:)

please update soon, its so good.

Your writing is fantastic! Kept me interested from PT.01 to PT.03. Waiting.... for PT.04

But not quite as good as the shared bathroom story! Although i have to keep reading!!

The slow build up is wonderful, please let them take their time!

I really like the way that the story goes evolving in to something really great. This story is just the best.

...Mutual sexual torture...family style...I am truly exhausted...They have done virtually everything a man and a woman can inflict on one another is a sexual way...EXCEPT the "dirty deed"...Are we there yet...? WOW!

I'm a fan of all of your writing, but this installment was exceptionally wonderful. Please keep writing more, you have such talent!

Facesitting! Face Grinding! Penis in Butt Crack grinding!

This is fucking paradise!

This is one of the best stories I've ever read on this site, can't wait to see what happens next.

nice story, but he better hope that the sister does not talk to Tanya. He seems to have no endurance to last more then a minute or two

I love how slow and deliberate this story moves. Excellent read.

very explosive.. kept me on the edge and guessing ... turning out to be a good story

I have noticed something in all your stories even the shared bathroom series, You really put a lot of emphasis on foreplay and buttcrack fucking, that is awesome, i love to do that in my actual sex life, but to have another person who likes it to is just great, i hope to hear more from you

Even buying into the fantasy idea that started the whole thing, it's now past silly that they are still moving along by mere inches after some of their activities. We're meant to believe that both of them have accepted bridging or say bending one of the biggest taboos in sex and yet they still tip toe around the idea of seeing the other sibling's genitals or touching and feeling freely.

I don't mind buying into the magic beans in a fantasy but don't proceed to tell me they hatch into a litter of kittens. Even in a fantasy, it's time for the beanstalk to reach into the clouds and move this tale along. Get to the sex already!

This should be made into a film!!!

Obviously Im still reading to the end of the chapter and its good, but hell its infuriating! ...hence my burning need to poke it hard with my humor stick! Here we go! ;

"And I'll tell you what, I'll take this off too if you put your hand under your boxers this time."

Waitaminute, loser boy has been jacking off with his hand over his boxers? What a putz! (Shaking head sadly)

'The following morning I woke up feeling entirely the opposite as I had felt on Saturday. All I could think about was how wrong it was that Sara and I were getting physical. I guess I was panicking, and having spent most of my sexual drive the prior night I was having a hard time justifying what we were doing.

I resolved in my mind that I wasn't going to let Sara keep doing this with me. Unfortunately I didn't have the nerve to tell her, so I wrote a quick and awkward note telling her I was sorry about last night, that we should probably stop and we could talk about it later.'

(Rolling eyes). Gawd he is so pathetic!!

'It didn't feel right. The girls were wearing more clothing, but I was doing what I had always done. Not that it ever felt right, but until now it had never bothered me this much. I leaned back in my chair and closed my eyes. I looked at the screen again and could almost imagine myself looking at one of my favorite porn sites. I felt my heart racing again. I shook my head to clear it and before I knew it I had yanked the plug of the power strip from the outlet. My computer, monitor, printer and everything else shut off.'

Lol, it never bothered you AT ALL before! ...not until self righteous sister laid a guilt trip on you, assuming that you thought a certain way. Assuming it was degrading to women when the women went out of their way to do it to make a lot of easy money! Lol.

'I looked at her beautiful shining eyes. "I could use your company tonight." I told her.'

'I reached down, nervously, and ran my hand down my thigh, then back up towards my groin. She watched, smiling, as I finally let my hand slide onto my penis and begin to massage and stroke it. I looked at her beautiful body, mesmerized by the beauty of her chest.'

...so much for 'just wanting company' tonight, lol.

'I was careful to keep my boxers covering myself, though the way my little sister was staring it was obvious she wouldn't have minded a little slip.'

He's such a huge wanking pussy!!

....third date with Tanya and he hasn't kissed her? (See line above!)

'It's not like I was expecting to be invited upstairs tonight for a night of passion, I just wanted a kiss or a hug or anything more than just a smile to say goodnight. Maybe I was just in too much of a hurry. Stupid hormones.'

No, you just need to quit being such a huge pussy and just fucking kiss her!

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' All I saw, with the hem of her nightgown surrounding me, was the crotch of her panties...only several inches above my face.

"If you're always in this mood after a date..." she began and ended with a frustrated, anxious sigh.

With the sounds and light from the movie surrounding us, I felt my pulse quicken as I memorized every line and curve of her body above me and every thread I could see of her cotton underwear. I could smell her feminine scent and feel the heat radiating from between her legs as I reached into my pajama pants and started to stroke my firming erection. I breathed deep and let my hand pleasure my cock, knowing she was watching.'

....wait, so let me get this straight. She pushes you onto your back, straddles you and sticks her pussy right above your face.... And you start jacking off?! Dude, just cut your fucking dick off and go join a fucking convent. How. Fucking. Stupid. Can. You. Be. (Facepalm)

I give up, he's a total lost cause.

'I slid my hand away and out of my PJ's, making sure to pull the elastic back up to keep myself covered (not wanting to assume anything).'

Well you dont have to sssume you're retarded, thats a given. 'Gee, sis has her hands down my pants and is getting her face pretty close to my dick, I better cover up my willie!' I can't even begin to quantify his stupidity, his innate lameness. Does his mommy still change his diapers, because thats about his I.Q. level. Sheesh.

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'I think I nearly threw her off as my body strained to cum, and I know my ejaculation pushed my cum through the fabric and between her lips.'

....all she does is put her mouth on you over your underwear and you start cumming?! Pathetic! ...he's already cumming constantly like a twelve year old who's just discovered his dick... In fact I've about decided that was how the character was actually written and the author just changed the ages to make the story publishable here. ;/. ...kinda been going downhill instead of improving.

"I am so thankful for how kind you are and how patient you are with me. I know you were probably wondering what was wrong with me. I guess there is something wrong with me but I know what to do about it. And I'm really glad you haven't pushed me and seem to be okay that I'm taking this slow."

....guess what? She's got a lot more problems than just that, stick around and you're gonna find out. The hard way. It's a long, hard road dating someone with serious issues, hidden issues and unknown issues. Been there, done that. You'll spend three to five times as long to get anywhere close to where you want to be and it will never be a 'normal' relationship. Even if you stay together and she's great, you'll miss out on a lot of what you would have otherwise found in a normal relationship.

"Are you sure you're okay with this?" I whispered.

...im surprised his sister isnt fucking tired of hearing him constantly ask that! "Didn't I just tell you to get in bed with me dunbass?! Never-mind, just go to your room and jack off if you're so fucking stupid you cant see the rain as it soaks your clothes!"

I think everyone who commented here must have read a different chapter than I read. After the amount of time that's passed in this story and the brother and sister are still farting around with their cloths on or are just rubbing themselves against each other is pathetic. I thought the first story this guy wrote was fucked up, but am beginning to think this is going to be just as bad. So far it ain't looking good.

Great Story!

Beautiful

Hot, how long before they screw. Can’t wait.

5/5