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LordSlamdawggalmost 12 years agoMy main complaint is that this is not a multi-part series !
Theres a million ways this story could go . Its nowhere near done. I hope to see more.
Khaymaralmost 12 years agoExcellent story.
Gotta agree with LordSlamdawgg. This story is just begging to be continued. I was hooked from the first paragraph. You write very well. Hope you continue it.
Nimeover 11 years agoIncredible beginning! I can imagine this story going so many ways. Please write more!
Jaxon16about 6 years agoAn old gem. Glad I found it
Great story and written so well. Your narrator kept me glued to the page,and I did not skim over a word. You are so prolific with all your stories, so try to find a continuation for this one. Thanks.
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