by ArtForm
was an excellent start ot the new story can not wait for the next chapter
Surrounded by female relatives; he can't live with them, but he can't live without them!
I just finished reading this and I already cannot wait for the next chapter! I love it!
its fucking insane.... God.... it was totally mindblowing "art". It was gr8. Waiting 4 more
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I loved the whole passive-aggressive thing going on. It was so cute!!! And there were some seriously hilarious moments in there. Now I can't wait to find out what happens next!
Hot damn, a new series I can start following and not play catch up on! I'm going to like Alex, I can tell already.
This chapter had me laughing my pants off. I love Alex, he's so cute. And wow is there gonna be some fighting between the girls. I can just sense it. Please post soon, I can't wait to read on.
From, your crazy nutter of a fan
and that would have been a real shame. I hope everyone else found it because it is a great addition to your on going series. I just love Alex. We haven't yet had a character like him. He's so young with thought of staying in California and the freedom it brings, until he makes a trip back home. Now this young man will have to start facing the responsibilities of being an adult. I look forward to watching him grow. And what of Keona and her powers? I can't wait to see what surprises she has in store for us. And will she ever change into her were? As always you have my attention and I eagerly await the next chapter!
LOL! I'm joining the ranks of the others here who love Alex! He's just so... I don't know the word for it but I think you've captured the essence of a boy just pass the brink of manhood -he's grown up and sexy yet confused and stumbles a lot.
Love the style of writing too! light hearted and funny! Hope to read the next chapter soon!!
isn't Alex and Koena Cousins. aren't they related through Pearl and Eian. or is my eyes playing tricks on me.
they aren't related because pearl is the sister to the second in command and not to the Alpha and he is like hundreds of years old and never had any kids before
You have done it again. Another fantastic beginning.
Ah, young love... with so many twists and turns.
*****
Didn't he just ask the alpha to tell her who had called him? Love the story so far.
totally NOT what i expected and was hoping for. i was wanting alex and marine together lol. but itll be good this way too. good to see an affectionate side of keona. love all your stories! <3
It was kind of hard to really figure out all of the connections, but this is good! i love the first add! cant wait to read more! :)
Great start. Some interesting new characters, and a little concern for the spies, but it wasn't clear if it was an American concern or the old Council keeping an eye on all the younglings. Interesting beginning to a whole new chapter.
Toyed with a GSXR yesterday by the way, while on my CBR. Hmmmm. Such fun. LOL
Alex is doing better than Eian and the vampires, at least he realises why he got the cold shoulder.
Trying to figure out who all the girls are was confusing. It reminded me of logic puzzle