All Comments on 'Pushing Boundaries Ch. 01'

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donaldedonaldeabout 13 years ago
excellent start

was an excellent start ot the new story can not wait for the next chapter

katgoddess1katgoddess1about 13 years ago
Poor Alex

Surrounded by female relatives; he can't live with them, but he can't live without them!

mokkelkemokkelkeabout 13 years ago

i feel for alex, he's my new favorite!!!

cool66cool66about 13 years ago

oh god i just love it

they r so cute...............

imanerdimanerdabout 13 years ago
MORE!

I just finished reading this and I already cannot wait for the next chapter! I love it!

om007om007about 13 years ago
ah...

its fucking insane.... God.... it was totally mindblowing "art". It was gr8. Waiting 4 more

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ghotiisfishghotiisfishabout 13 years ago
I loved it!

I loved the whole passive-aggressive thing going on. It was so cute!!! And there were some seriously hilarious moments in there. Now I can't wait to find out what happens next!

durabluedurablueabout 13 years ago
Superb

Hot damn, a new series I can start following and not play catch up on! I'm going to like Alex, I can tell already.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Amazing!!!

This chapter had me laughing my pants off. I love Alex, he's so cute. And wow is there gonna be some fighting between the girls. I can just sense it. Please post soon, I can't wait to read on.

From, your crazy nutter of a fan

MizTMizTabout 13 years ago
Almost Missed It

and that would have been a real shame. I hope everyone else found it because it is a great addition to your on going series. I just love Alex. We haven't yet had a character like him. He's so young with thought of staying in California and the freedom it brings, until he makes a trip back home. Now this young man will have to start facing the responsibilities of being an adult. I look forward to watching him grow. And what of Keona and her powers? I can't wait to see what surprises she has in store for us. And will she ever change into her were? As always you have my attention and I eagerly await the next chapter!

elsanguineelsanguineabout 13 years ago
Camp Alex!

LOL! I'm joining the ranks of the others here who love Alex! He's just so... I don't know the word for it but I think you've captured the essence of a boy just pass the brink of manhood -he's grown up and sexy yet confused and stumbles a lot.

Love the style of writing too! light hearted and funny! Hope to read the next chapter soon!!

Queen_VickiQueen_Vickiabout 13 years ago
waaaiit

isn't Alex and Koena Cousins. aren't they related through Pearl and Eian. or is my eyes playing tricks on me.

ushergalushergalabout 13 years ago
love alex

they aren't related because pearl is the sister to the second in command and not to the Alpha and he is like hundreds of years old and never had any kids before

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
more ... more!

You have done it again. Another fantastic beginning.

Ah, young love... with so many twists and turns.

*****

willieonewillieoneabout 13 years ago
Why?

Didn't he just ask the alpha to tell her who had called him? Love the story so far.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
omg

totally NOT what i expected and was hoping for. i was wanting alex and marine together lol. but itll be good this way too. good to see an affectionate side of keona. love all your stories! <3

BlahBLAGHBlahBLAGHabout 13 years ago

It was kind of hard to really figure out all of the connections, but this is good! i love the first add! cant wait to read more! :)

apollonaapollonaabout 13 years ago
Lovely

Great start. Some interesting new characters, and a little concern for the spies, but it wasn't clear if it was an American concern or the old Council keeping an eye on all the younglings. Interesting beginning to a whole new chapter.

Toyed with a GSXR yesterday by the way, while on my CBR. Hmmmm. Such fun. LOL

little_piggylittle_piggyabout 13 years ago
cute!

ah, first love . . .

NightpleasureNightpleasureabout 13 years ago

i like this story....

BoundlifeBoundlifeabout 13 years ago
poor pookie

Alex is doing better than Eian and the vampires, at least he realises why he got the cold shoulder.

Trying to figure out who all the girls are was confusing. It reminded me of logic puzzle

RaivinRaivinalmost 9 years ago
Huh

Rather an odd spot to end the series....

RaivinRaivinalmost 9 years ago
LOL

Silly me! Please disregard my comment.

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