All Comments on 'Pussy-Mom's Pussy'

by deviantdove

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

needs more

SarahCarrySarahCarryover 2 years ago

Wow... It was a great read... Enjoyed to full

Description was great

BuzzCzarBuzzCzarover 2 years ago

Interesting plot and well done.

muskyboymuskyboyover 2 years ago

So weird, but I liked it. Not even sure why.....

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

It was a fun story, but it could have been drawn out a bit more. The scene where he's getting a BJ while talking to his dad was funny and sexy at the same time.

One small point. While it is called "doggie style", it's also how cats (and practically all other mammals) mate.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

the ending was great 💀

dazodazoover 2 years ago

Magnificent. I loved it.

TheGreyWolf81TheGreyWolf81over 2 years ago

Nice one. Definitely not the common plot around here, but what does that matter, ey? Good story!

greenreadergreenreaderover 2 years ago

I looove your stories and the way you tell them :-)

You know when you listen to a music and get that earworm moment? I got "brainworm" from this story as I knew I've read a similar story but couldn't quite remember what it was. But being a tenacious bastard I dedicated myself to ahem cough cough "research" and finally solved the mystery lol. It was rawls story "The Stone Hertz". BTW yours is much better imo (even if entirely too short you cheap bastard :-).

Also these funny moments and the way they were presented were my favorites. They brought a big smile to my face and stuck with me even after I've read the story. That one cookie, three machines thing you did as if that "important" info made the crazy things completely normal all of a sudden. Haha:

She had knelt down in the middle of the garage, and appeared to be chasing a bee that must have gotten in there through the door to the garden. The man, a balding guy in his mid forties, was looking helplessly at her, then at me, his eyes beckoning me to explain what the hell was going on.

"Sir." I tried. "You want a cookie?"

The man took one.

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"Fuck off...." mom hissed through her teeth, so soft that only I could hear it. "You are messing this up."

If she only knew, I thought, that I had just saved her ass, while I silently left the garage.

Mom sold three machines that day.

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Lets not kid ourselves and be honest enough to say that the story was VERY "stimulating". I never knew I had thing for "cat" things. Well, maybe I did know just not how much of a thing it turned out to be lol.

When Mom started acting like a cat (purring, stretching and showing off, left those panties as a gift) I was all the way in, balls deep invested in this story. And boy, did it deliver. The son had his fun and in the process saved his mom from the evil witches curse. Not bad at all, I say. We're not trying to save the world and cure world hunger over here.

Easily in the top three of your best stories. Man, I really am glad and grateful you share with us.

5 stars and a big THANK YOU for this story deviantdove.

PS. If you're interested I can send you a story I had commissioned from another author that is somewhat similar to this one.

PPS. Keep writing please.

deviantdovedeviantdoveover 2 years agoAuthor

Thanks everybody. Great to read you enjoy the stories. This is a fun way for me to practice writing and explore deviant fantasies. Reading all input and taking it aboard for next stories.

@greenreader, thank you for always taking time to write a comment. By now, your feedback has become a major motivation to keep writing. Glad you pick up on those details as well, I try to juice up the story with them. Also, I'd be glad to read that story. Please do send it to me.

greenreadergreenreaderover 2 years ago

@deviantdove

No problem, would love to give at least something back for your stories.

I'll send you a message with a request for contact details. If I recall correctly Literotica has 5k characters limit or such when sending through the contact box so I would have to cut and send a bunch of times in smaller pieces as there is 93k characters in my story. Not finished completely either, lol.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Loved it! Obviously you are an educated person and put the right amount of sex with a compelling story. Please continue writing.

AlexiaAlexanderAlexiaAlexanderabout 1 month ago

This was cute & sexy. I have always love stories where basic animal instincts drive people. Becoming baser creatures that just want to breed. This is a very favorite story now. The way of breaking the spell was very funny as well.

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21 january 2023 I squeezed in another story. Hope it gets published soon! Enjoy. Now I will vanish from this planet for a while. Ciao. 20 january 2023 Just uploaded a new story in 'The Magic Ring' series, waiting for moderation. This will probably be my last for a long time...