All Comments on 'Putting A Bitch In Her Place'

Awesome story! Hot as hell! The only thing I wished was for the three girls to finger his puckered butthole and give him a deep prostate massage.

His ex would be hung up in a tree after being half eaten by wolves and crafty beavers.

That would be her worst Halloween ever! Grandpa would suck on her withered clit while sly old Granny rams a penguin's pecker up her stinky ass.

I'm sorry but this should have been condensed to about 2 pages. SOOOO many unnecessary words that did nothing to improve the story. Sometimes less is more.

The premise wasn't believable. If the three girls were his friends and hated her, why would they even be at her bachelorette party? And why would she perform oral sex in front of them?Just too dumb. Then it stumbled on forever and a day. Junk writing.

I feel asleep waiting for the story to heat up. Sorry, but you buried any desire under a pile of words.... zzzzzzz

Loved it!! very hott story continue writing more!

Page after page of pure trash. You gotta be pretty simple minded to enjoy this rot.

Lots of feedback here. Thank you everyone (Both good and bad). It will help me improve on my writing.

Of course it's unbelievable, this IS a site for fantasies and not always steeped in reality. If you don't like a story and just have to leave a comment, just state it's 'not your style' and keep it moving.

Your story was awesome!

what the fuck took me so long. TK U MLJ LV NV

I hate stories about weak candy ass men. 1 star

Hell hath no fury like a women scorned.

Also I'm a believer in Karma so in this situation the dude deserved it

Lila's dress and remark when they all arrived at Evan's house she was expecting someone, perhaps Brad.

Too bad he didn't show up and get invited to the party.

well written, but I think this kind of action is not for me

You have good writing talent. But every one of your male characters are beyond pathetic. Oh, btw. I'm sure you meant the title to reference the wife. However Evan was the true little bitch of the story. And the only time he was not was when he was being an ass hole to the only women in the story that were good to him.

To many flaws in your story. When 3 friends tell someone the same same story they're going to try to confirm it. Best friends are always the ones people always confide in. That is where that is where this story starts going wrong and it just gets worst. This story is so long I skipped the last 2 pages so I could give it 1 star

This comment is gender neutral because it applies to both men and women

It's a damn story, if you like that kind of thing good on you. If you don't like it don't read it a save your negative comments. Your comments are worthless, you've already said you didn't like the story.

Again it's a damn story which means nothing.

I'd give it a six if I could....

I won't even list the ways this is so fucked up, just don't want to waste anymore time.

It was corny, but I liked it

4/5

And NOT in a good way.

As if Leila the way uve described her would let them get away with wot they did, the day they released her she could of gone straight to the hospital phoned the police an had them arrested which is likely for the way u describe Leila an she had a lot of proof she had been assaulted. Leila was desperate to keep him away from those girls if they get done for assault would of done this. Leila deserved some payback from her cheating but should of been as her husband’s behest

Evan knocks on the door... Leila answers the door holding a glass of... wearing a sexy nightie saying; 'You're early.... then realizes it's Evan... So, she gets tied up. forced to watch her cuckold husband have sex with three women, etc. etc. So, What happened to "Brad" who was to knock on the door? Clearly she was expecting him ... or... some other man.... Not just revenge on the cheating wife but also on her lover too.

Most consensual sex in non con I've seen so far. 5/5

Nato_

Boring crap!

Emily was the best! And the cutest! Honest to god she was my favorite. And small boobs are perfectly fine by the way, A-C cups are the ideal range, anything more is wasted. Anyways, I hope she is the one that marries him, and they all four of them stay happy for the rest of their lives <3

Just ok. Not well written. It did not read well, to mixed up. A bit to long it could be done in 4 to 6 pages. I stopped after page 2, speed read the rest. You wrote that Even murdered Brad, then Brad returns.