All Comments on 'Puzzled After Doing a Puzzle'

Shafting the future daughter-in-law is not incest but definitely erotic coupling

Another well-deserved 5. I probably couldn't have turned down Cherry either.

Father in laws come in handy for more than just fixing things around the house. Fun little story, glad his daughter in law wants more kids.

The category I choose for this story Erotic Coupling because nothing else seemed to fit. The powers that be changed it to Incest.

I really liked this story, especially the snappy dialogue and relatable character interactions. Not a lot of writers can include detailed character development in an erotic story without it coming off as phony or belabored. You did a great job fitting all of it in while still only using about a page and a half on the site.

Liked it, but only four stars because of inconsistencies.

"I woke and wondered why I was nude in the guest bedroom spooning a naked twenty-five-year woman."

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"I felt her pussy clamp down on my dick and allow myself to orgasm. I filled her vagina with my cum.

She sprawled out on her stomach. I cuddled with her until I heard her snore and then I took my leave noiselessly."

Two different versions of what happened.

Sure, the first one fitted the "puzzled after doing a puzzle" title, and led to the flashback, but the flashback needn't and shouldn't have ended differently!

Excellent