All Comments on 'Pyjama Party'

Delicious continuation after the middle-of-the-night break....and very well-behaved of you NOT to include Susan at all!! LOL Follow-up??

Has a good beginning to what could be a nice series of stories involving his daughter and her friends.Maybe they become a small harem and get pregnant or some other twist like one or more having nice single mothers that want a threesome with the father and their daughter.

And she hollers "rape" and he supports her for life or goes to jail.

That's realism.

Has the potential to be more than just one chapter!

The writer is a total wanker

Verry well written with great discription and way to keep the suspense up with the interruption in the middle. Definatly has potential to be much more than a single chapter!