All Comments on 'QOS Island Ch. 04'

love the story line can't wait to see what's next

keep writing pleaase.... waiting for next chapter 5!!! you are an amazing erotica writer!!!!

Fabulous. Can't wait for the next chapter.

I love this storyline! Can’t wait to see what the future lies for Tabitha and Candi. Hopefully plenty of BBC in both their futures! Kevin being turned into a shemale is a great twist and can’t wait to see what awaits Laura and Jason.

Great story! Can't wait to read the next chapter! I'd love to read about how Tabitha's sister and parents react when they see her. Maybe Tabitha is bred and they are transformed as well.

Chapters 5 and 6 have been made and awaiting for approval. it's been taking about 2 weeks to get a story approved. Hang tight dear readers!

Tabitha’s family may be on the island. Perhaps they will be captured and transformed as well.

This story would be infinitely better with the excessive pejoratives.

Boringly predictable. They all talk it over and figure out they were tricked and kidnapped, some removed from careers and lives, but none try and plan an escape or contact home? I just don't see everyone dropping into line.