All Comments on 'Quarter Fixation'

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012Say012Say7 months ago

Great fun, I liked about a quarter of it. Gave that part a star and a quarter. Some 25-year veteran forbid rating a quarter of a story and corrected my ranking, multiplying it by 4.

rnebularrnebular7 months ago

I normlike works from this author, but what the heck was this drivel? Trying to throw shade at literotica? Seriously, what the f??

johntcookseyjohntcooksey7 months ago

Touché! That was great fun. An impressive combination of number-play and wordplay. And on short order, no less. Sometimes the best results are born with a gun to the head deadline. And you checked off another challenging (I’m guessing) ‘Q’ title. Thank you much.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percy7 months ago

Not your usual story!

5

SyzyguySyzyguy7 months ago

Lots of quarters collected here ($6.25?), thank you.

WellplayedsirWellplayedsir7 months ago

Nice play on Sir Mix-a-Lot

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bc7 months ago

Clever and entertaining - no score

prinnaveaprinnavea7 months ago

I'll give a buck 25 on this. I liked the reference to the song. Makes wonder will man still be alive?

MsDirectorMsDirector7 months ago

Congrats on tge Marty Robbins reference let alone Joan Jett 👏

skruff101skruff1017 months ago

The shocking thing is that it took 2 hours and 25 minutes to write. Of course that time included the 2 hours 20 minutes of the movie that came on just as he was about to start typing, so understandably he got distracted.

Still as a show of exasperation at being invited to effectively pat Literotica on the head and say ‘who’s a good boy then’, it achieves its goal.

AngelRiderAngelRider7 months ago

Weird

However, I expected number six to be sitting cross legged on the floor.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Loved the style. Like a machine gun shooting 'quarter' 34 times. Inventive.

L.

seadog58seadog587 months ago

Well played. Good luck on making it to the quarter finals.

enderlocke77enderlocke777 months ago

I did this in about two hours and twenty-five minutes, and it shows.

Rofl and ty

BSreaderBSreader7 months ago
Interesting

But not a winner

lAnatomistelAnatomiste7 months ago

Stranger Than Whale Snot!

5-stars.

26thNC26thNC7 months ago

Giving it another quarter of an hour might have helped.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

A quarter won't get you a cup of coffee, a newspaper or a phone call anymore.

Sumnut96Sumnut967 months ago

I read this tale @ a quarter after 11. Clever and witty. Surprising that the score is so low. 5 stars from me. DMW aka

DDAY55DDAY557 months ago

Is biquarterly twice a quarter or every 2 quarters? If I really gave a quarter I could Google it.

BentNotBrokenBentNotBroken7 months ago

Clever clever wordsmith (as always). Please keep them coming

jlg07jlg077 months ago

Well done! Ckever and loved the joan jett reference!

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Very very witty and clever BardnotBard

oldpantythiefoldpantythief13 days ago

Well, you did warn us that the story was written rather quickly. I like submissions from this author so decided I'd give it a go. I'm not an English Lit snob, far from it, but I did stumbled over the first "were" when it jumped up. Regardless, I was able to make it through the rest of the story with a chuckle.

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