by HotSprings22
That was hot!!!! I sure as hell hope your computer didn't catch on fire writing that one. We need some more chapters. LOL. Keep up the fantastic work.
Yes, I used two "T"s... on purpose. I'm so glad to see an update for this story. Please keep it going.
Omg I've been stalking this story like crazy !! This chapter was amazing . I can't wait to see what's in store for them . Also; I looooved the wrt last line of the story !! This chapter was superb, magnificent, excellent !! Lol
I was really glad to see your newest posts. My only feedback is this: men after sports practice *reek*. Especially football with all the pads. I'm half gagging right now just thinking about it.
Sweet freakin niblets! wow!! I love this chapter, more please like now!!.
so well written....waiting for more excellence from you....
wow. i love this story, it is so sexy and it snuck up on me, i thought it would merely be an interesting interlude until you could get back to
Distractions.. but what an intoxicating one this is. great job, sweetheart, this is great. pam aka cherryotop
I have been going thru it, waiting for this story to be update. Thanks so much-you made my weekend.
I am so obsessed with this story...I want to go out and buy a Team Alceo shirt. Or stand in front of your house cheering every time you post a chapter. The sad part is I'm not even exaggerating that much. Keep up the splendid work.
Thank you for writing such a good story.... This is now one of my favorite stories that I had recently read..............
Just finished reading and loved this story, hopefully this isn't the end and there is more to come form these two.
Love your writing, and I think this is the best of some excellent stories so far. Can't wait for more :)
loove this story!! and the update.. looking forward to see what else you have in store!! hurry back :)
only complaint i got is i need more of it please post more soon
I just started reading this story it was great but I hope it doesn't end right there I'm looking forward to see what happens next if its not over so please update soon thanks!!
So fucking hot, i dont want this to end, very primal. More please.....
the random, taking of Galynn right after he finished practicing was amazing... his primitive primal urge to possess her is really interesting; exciting to see what happens next
Fuck me! Show some damn pride in your writing, then mistakes like this wouldn't be there:
"her mouth opening and inviting her in"
These sort of mistakes are rife trough this whole story. She's allowing her mouth to open to let herself in? FFS EDIT.