All Comments on 'Quarterback Sneak Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Holy Shit!!!!

That was hot!!!! I sure as hell hope your computer didn't catch on fire writing that one. We need some more chapters. LOL. Keep up the fantastic work.

caramelcreamcaramelcreamabout 13 years ago
Hott...

Yes, I used two "T"s... on purpose. I'm so glad to see an update for this story. Please keep it going.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Ahhh !!!

Omg I've been stalking this story like crazy !! This chapter was amazing . I can't wait to see what's in store for them . Also; I looooved the wrt last line of the story !! This chapter was superb, magnificent, excellent !! Lol

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Great Story

I was really glad to see your newest posts. My only feedback is this: men after sports practice *reek*. Especially football with all the pads. I'm half gagging right now just thinking about it.

neenee7neenee7about 13 years ago
OMG

SO DAMN HOT MORE SOON

hisangelbeautyhisangelbeautyabout 13 years ago
Sweet

Sweet freakin niblets! wow!! I love this chapter, more please like now!!.

lexvenelexveneabout 13 years ago
hmmmmmm.....love it

so well written....waiting for more excellence from you....

missingmissmissingmissabout 13 years ago
ooooooooooooooh

something is gunna happen real bad to our girl........

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

please write another one soon this is one of my favorites!

cherryontop1973cherryontop1973about 13 years ago
you done good gurl..

wow. i love this story, it is so sexy and it snuck up on me, i thought it would merely be an interesting interlude until you could get back to

Distractions.. but what an intoxicating one this is. great job, sweetheart, this is great. pam aka cherryotop

shereads38shereads38about 13 years ago
Withdrawls....

I have been going thru it, waiting for this story to be update. Thanks so much-you made my weekend.

Pixie010Pixie010about 13 years ago
More... Soon!?!

My fav story currently. Got me addicted girl.

ImaniImaniabout 13 years ago
This is so good....

I am so obsessed with this story...I want to go out and buy a Team Alceo shirt. Or stand in front of your house cheering every time you post a chapter. The sad part is I'm not even exaggerating that much. Keep up the splendid work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Excellent writing

Thank you for writing such a good story.... This is now one of my favorite stories that I had recently read..............

ccmioonccmioonabout 13 years ago
loved it

hope theres more to come

Sammy1on1Sammy1on1about 13 years ago
Loved It

Just finished reading and loved this story, hopefully this isn't the end and there is more to come form these two.

deliciousthoughtsdeliciousthoughtsabout 13 years ago
love it

Love your writing, and I think this is the best of some excellent stories so far. Can't wait for more :)

greek0ukla15greek0ukla15about 13 years ago
love!

loove this story!! and the update.. looking forward to see what else you have in store!! hurry back :)

coloroflove1234coloroflove1234about 13 years ago
looooovveee this story

only complaint i got is i need more of it please post more soon

greek0ukla15greek0ukla15about 13 years ago
love

@coloroflove1234 i agree!!! bring us more HotSprings!! :)

IndianPrincess2IndianPrincess2about 13 years ago
Great

I just started reading this story it was great but I hope it doesn't end right there I'm looking forward to see what happens next if its not over so please update soon thanks!!

MinxieleeMinxieleeabout 11 years ago
WOW

So fucking hot, i dont want this to end, very primal. More please.....

AMHJ89AMHJ89over 10 years ago
hotness

the random, taking of Galynn right after he finished practicing was amazing... his primitive primal urge to possess her is really interesting; exciting to see what happens next

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Fuck me! Show some damn pride in your writing, then mistakes like this wouldn't be there:

"her mouth opening and inviting her in"

These sort of mistakes are rife trough this whole story. She's allowing her mouth to open to let herself in? FFS EDIT.

6King6Kingalmost 2 years ago

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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