All Comments on 'Queen for a Day'

by RedHairedandFriendly

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duddle146duddle146almost 18 years ago
Erotic and appealing!

Loved the graphic erotic scenes. Your writing is very vivid.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
A twin's thought's:

I am a twin and would do this am more if I was the character in this hot torid tale. Take care and keep writing!

jushornyjushornyalmost 18 years ago
Wish I Had

a twin brother like you have written

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Best I've read yet!

Most of the stories I read here fade after reading, but this has been on my mind for days (And is the first time I've felt compelled to leave a comment). I must have read it half a dozen times and it's still as arousing as the first time. I'll be checking out your other submissions as soon as possible.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
sexy read

loved it please keep writing. wish my brother was like that

OhGreatOakOhGreatOakabout 15 years ago
HOT!!! HOT!!! HOT!!!

Whew! I'm having to fan myself off after that story! I felt my face heat up near the end. Great story! I loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
very hot

excellent writing loved it need more trans stories from ya frs

Synthia44Synthia44almost 3 years ago

I think this was a HOT story. My cock was hard almost all the way through it. Excellent writing. Now I just look forward to more.

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