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by Middleagepoet

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
It proves that artful writing is alive and kicking

A wonderful, witty and well written piece, short, pithy and to the point. Just proves that writers on Lit are not all lavvy wall writers!!

AzPilotAzPilotover 14 years ago
I laughed all the way through. What a different--

take on things. Ingenious as well as very funny. Thank you sir.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Brilliant concept

I really liked the idea.

Though you could have given Charlie more problems like his girlfriend coming over all faint, (pun wasn't intended - maybe I'm just a natural), as the ribbon went.

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