All Comments on 'Quiet Time'

This was totally hot. I can relate to her need to let it go. Too much of a control freak to ever try hypnosis but I did get wet reading this. Masterfully done.

Mainly repeating what you already wrote in many other 1-scene-stories.

I think you waste your talent with these snippets. I loved the superhero-stories you wrote. I really like to learn more about Adventure Girl and the others. I also loved the few other multi-part-stories. (e.g. White Album)

Mmm I always leave these stories wanting a part 2. Desperate for the scene where she wears the collar.