All Comments on 'R.E.D. Tiger Ch. 02'

Alan is part angel.

part elf or angel with the way Samuel reacted to the handshake

freaking awesome, i love it. you drawed me back in with this chapter. as for what alan is i'd say right now he is a bitza aka a bit of this and a bit of that. but i happen to agree that he could be possibly part angel and maybe tiger from his parents that he doesnt know alot about then add to the mix of being the new chosen one ya got a recipe for some interesting times for him on the road to discovery.

keep up the good work look forward to reading more.

was actually not badly written at all. definitely a little more descriptive than some i've read here. not sure i still get the location of the U-spot but definitely different. you made it believable, with the woven in pauses and reactions. i'll give it a 4 on that aspect.

My only suggestion would be to check for grammatical errors a little more thoroughly. Other than that, can't wait to read the next chapter.

Alan already is the grandson of a vampire and werewolf!

Alan is or was half demon half angle now becming the host has activated his powers

if i had to guess i think he is related to a dragon

if im right my contact is Ocvdarkstar@yahoo.com

he could write it that way but i think he must be something more the demon would realize he was an angel

he must be a dragon... Great Story!!!

Can't wait to see how his "old" gf and Ex-Best friend take it when he says Good Bye.

and she realises that she screwed herself out of his Money.

Liked the sex scene a lot. and as for what Alan could be I also think Half Angel Half demon.

Can't wait for it to continue unless that means the new genie story won't update as soon. Uggh now I don't know which one to root for.

Great story!

i say a little bit of everything

I'm personally thinking dragon since Samuel mentioned all the other races except dragons. I can't wait to find out what he is though, post soon. -Tim

As far as what he is, I would have say angel, as for why , because he upset Samuel so much. I'm enjoying this story very much. I'm looking foreward to the next ch. (Spin183 male)

Good story telling but spelling is average. A 40K watch because it has many "carrots of diamonds"?

From what it sounds like, he is a nephillim like dante from the devil may cry franchise... half angel half demon

Retired from an 8 year career in the military.

Two years ago at his 21st birthday?

Makes him 23

23 minus 8 equals 15

Now I know the writer said he does not know about the military, but they haven't enlisted 15 year olds since the Civil War.

Really interesting and compelling, will continue to read but the edit (or lack there of) is killing me..... 'of' instead of off, 'to' instead of too, these kinds of silly mistakes were happening so often, I just about punched my screen. It really took away from an otherwise good story. As an author on here I get it, there's only so much time one wants to put into a story you're putting out there for free. But this was so bad it really hurt the story. Keep up the creative work, I think you have something here, but give it a much more thorough read through before posting...

Dom.

I think he is an angel demon cross who is now the hybrid so he has all for factions inside of him and that is why the demon reacted to him.