All Comments on 'R.E.D. Tiger Ch. 04'

WELCOME BACK!!!!! I have to say; I was beginning to doubt your return there. But damn, this one was so good it left me all giddy for the next chapter. due to the excitement this chapter brought I buying myself a hybrid coolack :/

good work by the way, and I hope you cary on with the next chapters without having to deal with unfavourable circumstances in your life.

Very sorry for your loss, but very glad to have you back with us again.

I'm a bit surprised Alan neglected to mention the whole "leave Molina alone" thing, since that was supposed to be the whole reason he took over. That and he forgot to tell Molina that he was gonna be in London a lot longer than the couple of weeks he said earlier.

Sorry for your lost .

An interesting and wise (or not) choice, to embrace both sides of his hybrid,however I'm curious in London will have another beast wake up ?

One of the best stories dealing with weres and other creatures that I've read in a while. I can't wait to read the next installment.

Sorry for your loss. Welcome back though. Excellent story and I look forward to more!

There is so much going on in this story that even the writer can't keep track of it all.

Add to that well over two years between the last chapter and this one.

This could have been a good story, IF:

The writer had done even a little research into the military.

and if;

The writer had kept better control of what was happening in the story.

His reason for taking over the pack was to keep Molina from being coerced into joining it, but he leaves without saying a word to them about it.

His stepmother was so hateful toward him that she drove him from his home to join the military years before he was legal to, so he invites her to go to London for two weeks or is it two months?

After having not spoken to her for eight years.

Mind boggling.

He is described as a little guy when he is in the military and he is also described as 6 foot 4, hardly a little guy.

This feels more like the notes for a story than an actual story.

I am glad you came back, life can be cruel at times. I relay enjoy your writing!

I only keep coming back to literotica for Olympus, Tiger And Zeke. That's it. Through your bio I have been reading storiesonline.net a lot. If you post there please put in your bio.

you wright a good story. I hope for more soon. and also add to your other storys

Thank God u r back damn was waiting for so long it was killing me.

Please may we have some more, very catchy story.

I'm a big fan of your work,and this one and the Genies are great. Hope your doing well and have new material soon

Have really liked following Alan and want to see how his world evolves...

Cool story enjoyed it but when are you going to do any more with it?

I too want to see more of this story

A few problems. First, you Desperately need a good editor. Spelling and proper grammar would do this a world of good.

Second, Alan didn't say word one about the werewolves keeping their claws off of Molina or his sisters. Leaves a huge gap in their defenses. His home might be secure, but how about when they're at school, or the grocery store, for that matter?

In one of your chapters you said that if the Host allied with a group that they would get more power or get their original power back. Does this mean that all werewolves now have their original power level or just the member of his pack?

It is probably because I am not into sci-fi but this whole story was hard to read. I should have stopped half way through chapter 1.

i hope you plan on writing more of this.... I have read it 4 times and i loved it....

Im sorry to hear about your Aunt and Father .....but can you please write more of this one i really do love it and could you please do more of the others too ????

To the author plz continue this story! I find stimulating to read!

You have spun a really good yarn so far; I really enjoyed reading it. Since it has been about 3-1/2 years since the last installment, I am assuming it will not be continued. That is a real shame. You have lots of folks hoping that you will. Oh, well....

Maybe FTDS can lend a hand?

I find your story interesting please continue!

does it end here or is there more of this one?

There is so much story still to be told. Please come back and finish it.

Great story, can't wait for the next chapters.

I really hate when great stories end at the beginning of the middle part of the story.

GREAT Story can't wait to read what happens next.

Love the story I'm anxiously awaiting more.

I hope the author comes back to finish this series!

Thanks

Bruh... Why TF do people abandon stories that are this good for fuck sake