All Comments on 'Rachel's Humiliation'

This isn't a punishment. It's like saying to a child, Don't eat too many sweets and then giving them a whole bag sweets.

But it was well written and it was erotic. I know I believe that cheaters should be given a chance but no this time and not like this.

i wish my husband would take control like that. it has me very wet and horny. hope to read more.

Well written and husband was not amused by her fucking around, I enjoyed it.

been the one to go down to her workplace and let Jim know in no uncertain terma that he was to stay away fro his wife. He could have made Jim pay $500 for the blow job that he received and told him that if he wanted more then the price would be double and he would be there to watch marriedwithballs@yahoo,com

Great combination of sexual discovery, revenge, humiliation (sort of) and love.

here, have some more! How is more fucking, more sucking a punishment? If it is I'm going to be very bad and hope my wife punishes me that way. It was well written.

I was having a thought of what would he do if she lied about what he knew was the first time cheating on him. What would he do if he found out that she has been cheating on him for years.....Rich

Why this fucking idiot with a death wish, would have his wife fuck a few men in front of him as punishment. Unprotected sex does not seem to bother him. He is only concerned that she not give to others what she denies him. He has given her the green light to fuck and suck to her hearts content. Because the consequences are more of the same. Stupid story. You get 25 for getting your point across. It is ok to cheat as long as you deny your partner nothing. Bullshit.

The build was decent converse to the so called punishment which bordered on the insane.<P>

No rational husband could tolerate then force such an absurd whorish action to punish said whore.<P>

As a stroke it was just that - nonsensically silly - kind of a waste of the talent glimpsed.<P>

You can do better & have.

This story would have been better in a different category. Somewhat disappointing.

I originally started with a premise which, alas, I departed from. Had I looked at the story dispassionately, I too would have seen that it should have been posted in the Non-consent category.

Thanks for all of your criticisms (good and bad), it will only help me to improve / maintain good standards.

To those I upset, I apologise unreservedly.

Still, its nice to spur so many people on to vote and leave comments.

Roman

it was not her first, and the rush from the puishment may be reason for more adventures w/o david

Plot started but was forgotten as soon as the spanking started. For those who need no story to enjoy pure S/M descriptions...

Though it was overall good until he has her give two random men blow jobs, He basically has her repeat her original crime as punishment. I thought it would have been a lot better if those two men had just been witnesses and never joined in.

Great story, loved the whole thing. Needs another paragraph on the spanking part. Everyone has their fantasies and I don't understand why people have to criticize a well written story. Just move on if its not your thing.

is the worst time not to. TK U MLJ LV NV

MY CAPS LOCK OH GOD I TAKE IT IN THE ASS PLEASE SOMEONE HELP I SMOKE FAT COCK FOR THE LOVE OF GOD HELP ME

How stupid. There was no revenge in the story. I never understand how any one can think that "punishing" a cheating wife with more sex and sharing her with strangers is any kind of punishment. He didn't even make her quit her job or confront the guy she works with. If he fucked her like that and then threw her out and divorced her it might make sense . All the husband did was take what he should have been getting before she cheated. I kept waiting for plot twist and it never came. Horrible story.

she was already a slut.....he should have gotten paid for the whore

should have be beaten to a pulp

the local admitted cuckold, huecuck. since no one else has bothered to admit to being a cuck, huecuck is the primary source for cuck info. only a cuck who has admitted to being a cuck can speak from experience like a huecuck.

What humiliation? She loved it.

and isn't entertainment what the stories are all about? 5!

Revenge that had benefit and learning very well written and totally entertaining.

I know this is an older story, but even then STD's existed. So, the BJ's with strangers, or the gang bang as well, would risk David's health in addition to his wife. So he needs to find another punishment: eg. divorce, if she cheats again.

Actually this was a pretty good story. One that I did enjoy reading, and that others would probably enjoy as well. again good job.

What kind of lame idea is that? She's going to continue to cheat because she likes it. She'll get pregnant or bring home some nasty disease or turn him into the town's laughing stock cuckold. Why would he do anything but divorce the cheating slut? Horrible ending.

That is it every time I was drunk and did not know what I was doing. Divorce her or she will do it again.

My wife did this this same thing once, and I responded in almost the same way. It wasn't doggers that my wife got to blow as punishment though, it was my two best friends.

Everything turned out great in the end.

She's always coming home late, and absolutely soaked now. She tastes a bit funny on these occasions, and is always insatiable, wanting me to start by licking her out first. She certainly learned her lesson!!

My two buddies come round lots more too, and she doesn't mind anymore, even if they turn up while I'm still at work or away from home.

Happy wife, perfect life.

@married with balls.

From the tough east end? More like ,sucked every cock in the east end

Was he really that stupid? She's cheating. End of the story. Divorce the cunt. Horrible ending to a mediocre story.

He noticed in the shower her labia were different and he should have checked he panties and he would have seen she had been well and truly fucked she did more than just a blow job, and it wasn't just the first time at a guess.

Would have given it 5 if not for sharing her orally with two strangers.

Would love a follow up concerning her work environment, James and how it played out.

Just another bad story. Sigh, I used to love this site but it now seems that most stories are barely a 2* rating anymore.

Will Sweets.

Indeed it was humiliation, otherwise she wouldn't have gotten off on it like she did. Only thing that doesn't fit is her liking the idea of bring shared, and him having no intention of doing it. People say this should be in other categories...but the stories there are really quite different. And the comments make me ashamed to be human. Over here, the worst is "stupid cuck shit." I don't want to talk about the other comments.

It started off good until he showed her the picture. Then the story turned to crap and total crap at that. I would have left her in town and went home and divorce her,

if no strangers and you had David punish Jim and her together. Good start but not enough pow!JirzES

I stop reading the story as soon as he wanted a blow job. I would have left her where she was and divorce her.

That he has Punished her its time to get Jim by himself and Mess him up. He obviously intended to cause them problems by sending the Pic. So now he needs to get his. I say start with a Bare A_s Spanking with a Paddle or 2 and find out if he has some one near and dear to him. and make him watch as She gets hers.

Don't show her picture yet revenge first why cuckold himself

Blowjob is sex I can Not understand cuckolds

Drunk seems to always be excuse I don't like but understand as I have a few times got so lit that don't remember what I did

Let her see phone without letting her know you have seen it

If she admits and actively helps in revenge forgive and forget move on otherwise all over

Not much revenge.

to let the world know he's a cuckold. then the husband succeeded.

so in order to punish her for giving other men blow jobs he makes her give other men blowjobs?

cucks get one star

This story was nausea inducing! I could not even hack my way thru the first page of this. Please stop.

Revenge?

Looks more like you got hit with the Martian cuck ray when you wrote this...

It seems that this is the type of sex they should have been having and continued to happen? Also, my idea of revenge and humiliation are far different than your story. BTRH...

You need to look up the word revenge in the dictionary. It doesn't mean giving her all she wants and reveling to the world your a cuckolded loser. Utter trash. 1*

What they've said!

WTF

Pathetic

The husband is the only person who gets humiliated in this poorly conceived mess of a story.

Seriously this might be the stupidest thing I have ever had the displeasure to read on Lit.

Sorry, but no. Even she deserves better than that.

Stupid, I’m sure you can improve.