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"Thank you Nicky, as always, that was wonderful, I think I'll keep you!" she grinned. I was about to say something when we were interrupted by the sound of someone clapping. Ashley screamed and dived for cover, and my heart sank as I realised we were caught cold. I looked up fearfully, expecting to see Mother, but instead Judy was standing there in the doorway, leaning against the frame, with one raised eyebrow and a huge grin pasted on her pixie face. She hip-swayed into the room and pulled the covers up over my mid-section, grinning down at Ashley.
"Quite a show Ash, interesting technique; you should get him to try ramming that toad-sticker in your ass, now that'll really make you scream!" she smiled, and sat on the end of the bed.
"Judy! How did you ...when...why are you here?" stammered Ashley.
"Slow down, sweetie! I figured you'd stay home today, girl, so I thought I'd come and get some of the sordid details, help you minister to the fallen, that sort of thing; seems you were 'ministering' quite well all by yourself! You really should check your front door is locked before you decide to fuck your big brother!"
Judy grinned a big, happy, shit-eating grin, obviously having a ball. "Just imagine, I could have been ANYBODY, your mom for starters; I mean, HOW bad would that have been! You are such a dirty girl, your own brother, I'm shocked, I'm speechless, I'm jealous!"
- COMMENTS
Romantic_Old_Fool10 months agoReally nice character development. I think I may be in love with Judy, with a sense of humour like that she could almost be British (well northern at least)😉
ScottishTexanalmost 3 years ago😆 🤣 😂 roflmao!!! OMG! That last line delivered by Judy was priceless! My sides hurt from laughing 🤣 😂.
I'm glad that you addressed a lot of my concerns in this installment. Overall, I can't think of anything to critique this time around. I'm looking forward to moving to the next installment.
tiercenptabout 4 years ago@anon
why the last of barbara? the part about barbara gives him more depth of character, not just "the always sunny good looking guy with a horse cock and "perfect" character". uneven edges and internal conflict, that makes a character interesting. I don't think the story would've been this good without Barbara or frequent mentioning of her in the beginning.
Anonymousover 5 years agoYour description of Nicky's dad bring back painful memories. There really are monsters like him in this world. My father was similar, tho not as evil, but the belt buckle thing? I can relate. What is it about the English and punishing severely? Thank goodness Nick had someone who truly loved him both in England, and also in America when he moved there to escape the monster that was his father. The physical scars may heal, but the emotional ones may take years, and will still be felt even then. This story has made me cry, which I am not ashamed of, even tho I am a man. It has also made me laugh, which is carthartic. Well done!!! And the sister thing? I have often wished someone would love me like Ashley does her brother. HOT!
