All Comments on 'Rag Doll Ch. 03'

just wish it didn't take so long between chapters... keep up the good work please

Another great chapter...is it the dad or the brothers who raped Ashley. Something tells me there going to be some extra heavy playback coming very soon.

A proper story, makes a nice change. Sometimes a little "wordy" but well-written nevertheless. Please keep it up.

Your writing never ceases to amaze me! Keep up the amazing work. Looking forward to the next chapter! 5 stars

You writing is just great. I love the way you take the time and slowly build the story and not to rush it with a wham bam see you later or never. I can wait for the next chapter. I also love your other stories ... Nia and Lost and Found. Can't wait to read their next chapters either. Keep up the great writing!! I also gave you 5 Stars like I did with the other ones.

You know how I feel about your writing... You really have a gift for bringing the stories to life. I am glad that you are addressing the issue if Ashley's rape and I'm very interested to see where it goes...

Every story you write; with every character, plot, and chapter; you get better and better. That is saying a lot since you are already such a spectacular writer.

Thank you for another wonderful story!

Hell of a story beachbum keep on rolling it out

amazing keep them coming. you rock

David Nixon - Magic, as is the story, keep it up Beachbum, 5 well earned stars.

This story is next to be the best one I have read in a while. Keep up the good work and will be looking for the next chapter.

Raelly good read , the ending of the chapter keeps you hanging and antsy for the next chapter !!! Damm good writing, keep up the good work!!!!

Best story I've read so far on this website. Keep up the great stories!!!!!!!!!

I love you beachbum, one of the best writer on here at the moment, but ... please don't let it be who i think it was ;-(

You have a future at writing . Don't ever be too proud to ask for help every once in awhile .Listen to what your helpers have to say . Once you find a good combo stick with it and don't ever be afraid to try new things . All of your stories that I have read are amazing . Keep up the good work .

the story and plot are awsome. i couldnt stop reading it am so looking forward to the next chapter!

How long are you going to keep us hanging on till you publish the next chapter?

You have done a damn good job of it! You didn't focus on the sexual aspect as much as the human aspect and that makes it far more enjoyable than the usual "pump and dump" fare.

I look forward to more. Thank you.

When is the next chapter coming out?!?! I have to read it!

Luv these stories don't stop writing and give the bastard,who raped dear ashley, ASS!!!

Again this is a wonderful addition to the story. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Eagerly anticipating the next installment. Please do hurry.

For all those of you who've been bombarding me with requests not to end it here, please, calm down, the next installment is in prep, I promise you, and should be going to edit sometime this week, all being well. Once everyone's happy with it, it'll get submitted and left in the laps of the Lords of Lit to determine when they'll post it, so probably sometime late next week...sorry, but I can't get to it any faster than that, I can do it quickly, or I can do it well, not both, so I'm electing to do it well (or as well as I can, we shall see...).

Please be patient a little longer,

BB1958

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrggggghhhh!!!!!!!!!!.....Cant wait any longer....why do they take so long to post the story...!!!!!!!!

This is a great series and I look forward to reading more of it. I am not sure how anyone would think you were making spelling errors. I love the "Brit Lit" aspect of your writing. It is a delight to be able to read without stumbling over atrocious spelling and poor grammar. Please keep up the great work!

Dying for the next installment please hurry!

I hope you get the next installment out soon, I am so curious. I love all of your stories!

Great stories. I can't wait for the next one.

I realy, realy like this series. Can't wait for the next part

I've loved this one. It's one of the best series I've read on Literotica, and I've read a lot of them.

Since there's only one more chapter, I guess we'll find out who the rapist was soon.

Great series. Now for the last chapter. :-)

I don't know if you've gotten this one yet, but it's like a miniature E.L. James here! Simply amazing!

Very well done, as usual.. I just wish the stories weren't over so quickly. Keep up the good work!!! can't wait to read the next chapter.

i had a feeling that you would conclude the issue with his evil father, although i diddnt anticipate the connection with his step mother. i also thought that his evil father might be somehow involved with the rape. this is soooooo good that the sex is inconsequential.

ok, I am sorry, I Don't mean it,just that I am tired, very sleepy (its 3:29 am and I haven't slept all night) Nd now you left a huge cliff hanger as to who raped Ashley. I fucking hate you!!!

As a side not, Ashley is such a slut, and she should let Judy get a piece of Nick', even if its sloppy seconds.

back on point. YOU BARSTED!!!!

Read Chapter 4, please, before you explode.

Signed,

The Barsted

This is a really good story. The sex is almost a distraction from the romance and the drama. Kuddos!

Second time around, it is better this time.

Cue the dramatic music stinger! DUN-duh-DAAAAAA!

Wow! Excellent cliffhanger! I said in my comments on an earlier installment that Daddy dearest was going to come back to the USA and cause mayhem! But I didn't expect that he had already done so and could do it again! Time for Nicky to buy a Remington Defender 12 gauge for some home defense!

What a MAGNIFICENT piece of 'literature'...if we can cal it that!! This tale encompasses ALL aspects of reality and life...going smoothly from one moment to the next.

"EVIL, VIOLENT FATHER"...???!!! THAT is being too kind to the sorry so-and-so...he is about to find out about retribution, at the hands of his own son...and will deserve EVERY bit of it!

Story is written, no need to comment more...just get on with reading the next chapter!

Five**5**Stars!!

The mother slaps him twice, Then say I wanted to see if you are angry as your father. WTF Mental gymnastic is this?😂😂

For someone with a "small" temperament, 2 blows out of the blue can easily trigger a tantrum. She tested him to see if he had the same hairy trigger as his father.

I don't know if you still read these comments but you've really done so well with this story imo. From the beginning I've felt compelled to keep reading. I felt sad that his adoptive Mom took her own life but it was necessary for the story I guess. And now, on the rest of the story.