All Comments on 'Raging Love Ch. 08'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
what a chapter!

i have never read a book or a story so full of emotional conflicts: love, betrayal, passion, deceit and more.. all in just one chapter..

what a chapter indeed!

i admire the author's skills and his very good imagination - weaved around scenes of emotional dramas...

great writing...looking forward to chapter 9...thanks to covid19...the chapters keep on rolling on a very fast pace..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Hooked

Omg how could you leave us hanging like this lol you are so good Vanalas

Wait till Travis and Antonio find out what Bruce did to poor sweet innocent Sean

Please bring out chapter 9 ASAP

Kiwi Fan

Chancem77Chancem77about 4 years ago
wow

Don't leave us handing, can't wait for the next chapter. Really getting good.

mfa607mfa607about 4 years ago

So good! I’m hopeful that Sean’s ok. Nothing should happen bad to a child. What’s the tie in with Granny though? Great chapter! Thank you!

AKA983AKA983about 4 years ago
That was an epic chapter

i admire the author's skills and his very good imagination - weaved around scenes of emotional dramas...

So good to read

Thanks Van

AKA983AKA983about 4 years ago
No shit

What did Travis see?

Granny KATTY 😁😁

lonelyheartVAlonelyheartVAabout 4 years ago
Dude!!

I was really hoping that nothing would happen to Sean and Granny. This entire thing is really becoming messy.

You could write a novel. Think about it. :O)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Nigga?

I think side piece would have been better, unless you were also trying to be racist. Sad.

naughtymattynaughtymattyabout 4 years ago

This is a super good read! This to me, is the best chapter so far. I'm excited yet sad as this near its end. I hope you write more van, your writing is so great.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
I'm freaking out 😱😱

My God van. That was an amazing chapter. You always deliver way more than expected. Little sean and granny😭 keep them safe. i'm so sad it's coming to an end. Once again thank you for this adrenaline rush, kick ass chapter. I'm dying to for another chapter. CAN'T WAIT!!!!! We love you too by the way.

vanalasvanalasabout 4 years agoAuthor
Oh.... 😧😧😧😧😧😧

You guys I'm getting emotional. This story has been a rollercoaster ride for me and believe me when I say, I haVe felt the emotions of this story. I'm glad that I have so many friends reading my story. Let's hold each others hands as we reach the end. Hop on...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Awesome

Please post sooner than soonest. I love you Vanalas

josranvictorjosranvictorabout 4 years ago
THE MOST NERVE WRECKING CHAPTER MI SENOR

God have mercy....when i saw Rodrigo's scene....i was lyk hell why has this poor guy come to Emma,fuck when she insulted him i was fuming.....man it made me sympathetic i was Lyk "this heartless woman is abusing an innocent italian chef"😁😁😁😁😁😁,,Trust me through out that scene i was like heck this woman is really heartless but when i saw that grin on his face i was like........who sent himπŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”???

josranvictorjosranvictorabout 4 years ago
Haahhaahhaaa....Travis is abitch

That grin made me realize sth....that was"he is Travis sent" hahaha.only to find out later with a bomb that BITCH IT WAS TRAVIS HIMSELFFFFFFFFF,eeeeeh Trust me,that,was not in my mind....i cud never for once imagine Rodrigo being Travis even throught the whole chapter,except when i saw the name Travis when Santiago said itπŸ˜―πŸ˜―πŸ˜―πŸ˜―πŸ˜―πŸ˜―πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

josranvictorjosranvictorabout 4 years ago
Hahaha but Vanalas.....U gave Bruce the title"Foolish King"

Man....Bruce was really ashamed,,,as Ant said it,he gave us a really nice and fascinating performance hehe thanks to baby praveen....man the way he nearly moulted his skin because of those old bitches..how he dismissed and disrepected Emma hahahahaπŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€man that bitch got it yep,she deserved it and even more,Thats wat u get when u mess with the king...and i swear we r not done,those 3 bitches have just pulled off the fire trigger.....and that bitch Bruce huh Bruce...that foolish guy is really provocative but yeah he will have it for being with a stinking ass..... As prav said,his personality is driving Ant away from him so he better change it for the next dude cos Ant is OURS LIKE TRAVIS'S

josranvictorjosranvictorabout 4 years ago
How dare Him....Van how dare him...i swear i would kill him...i can kill Bruce for messing with our child

What does Bruce call him self Van??? How dare him slapping my baby Van😭😭😭😭😭😭😭...that toilet,,,even touching him is an abomination but he reached an extent of slapping our baby to a pulp?????....i hate him..i hate,hate hate hate him...Fuck him man....i swear he has to pay for even raising a finger to our baby Sean...God save them...nothing has to happen to my granny and Sean....the baby was innocent...what was thereto slap him for???Man fuck him.....my baby is now unconscious...and he has the guts to starter when asked....FOOLISH MOTHER FUCKER

josranvictorjosranvictorabout 4 years ago
HahahahI ACTUALLY DIDNT THINK ANTONIO WOULD..........SEE TRAVIS WITH SANTIAGO IN THIS CHAPTER..HAHAHA BUT YES...LET IT BEGIN

My Antony is now raging but y...he denied an explanation from prav so he s now becoming a psycho....man i hope nothing wrong happens to our man on the to the hospital anddddddd....has they r going to MEET THERE....HOOOOOOOOOO he z gonna find out........anddddd Bruce has caused that,thanks to the foolish guy..i have been wanting and longing 4 that high😁😁😁😁😁now let us play the MUSIC AS WE DANCE😏😏😏😏😏😏😏And trust me let Bruce pray that Antonio doesn't kill him(for both seperating them and ...hhhheeehhe for hurting the "handsome uncle's son"πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

josranvictorjosranvictorabout 4 years ago
Annnnd

Can someone pls enlighten me what Travis saw??????hmmmmmmm???? God am scared,at one end Ant almost died due to the accident on the other Travis met another surprise wat is that am freaking out......man how Tony almost fell off the cliff....eehhh

josranvictorjosranvictorabout 4 years ago

I cant wait......plz post van i miss it

...theme song

...Yesterday--Toni braxton

Take a bow--rihanna

I hate that i love u---rihanna

One step at atime-Jordin sparks.....plz my king post soon.......sorry for the late comments my king...i was at work

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
sean is safe

if one has noticed it said that bruce had been only on the 3rd step when sean pulled the hem of his shirt and smacked sean afterwards.. so it was not that HIGH! but nevertheless, pray everyone, that nothing is grave and sean is safe...

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