by Trahi
Your stories are so good at dragging me in. I love this new rain character and excited to see the journey you take him on.
I am so thrilled you are posting another story so soon. Your stories have an edge to them. It goes beyond rooting for the main character and hoping for an HEA. The intelligence and depth you bring to the characters make us all want more. The level of human suffering yet compassion makes me wonder about your own life. Whether you post in 7 or less is up to you. I am happily along for the ride.
There's a real story here & that's unusual; add well-written and you have a winner.
Your work is great. I enjoyed your other story but I like this one even better. I like your writing style, it's so captivating.
You wanted feedback. I think I like the shorter stories spread over more chapters. As long as you can keep up with the chapters in a timely manner.
Thanks for your stories.
I feel a pretty women theme sorta happening. But its different too. Very good so far.5