All Comments on 'Rain in the Gutter'

This story was definitely different and darker from your normal fare. Jim is a good villain to have pop up in a series where one of your Heroes catches him and either puts him in jail or turns the tables on him.

I thought the chain was on a person. Thought I was wrong when he said it was a mastiff, then saw I was right!

Yes it was dark . You have a way of telling a story that makes me get lost in them . Gave it a 5 star because I'm warped and like a good revenge story .

this guy is a psycho. The writing was good, but still to dark for me.

Definitely a lot darker then your normal Fair. Still very much along the lines of your other offerings. About a third Way though I figured he was the killer. Well done.

I must be dense, I never picked up what his hobby was until the end, lol.was a very good story it kept my interest until the end. it never clicked until I read the name of the girl at the end as to what his hobby was. I went back to do a reread to see what clues I missed

Wonder what he will do with the Rich Bitch. now that he has her started under control. Will she be his next or will he get himself another play house.

That's a fine piece of writing. I'm liking your story so much, it was disappointing to see only two pages long it was😔. Gave you 4*s. The mix of fantasy plot device and sad modern occurrence made it especially scary!!

Lost Boy, I'm going to read the rest of your posts.

Thanks for the story.

AMerryman

Again, crap.

Just kind of bizarre. Not worth much.