Rainbow Creek

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Karen gave a sharp yell and jumped both times. She took a couple of quick steps and then stopped. She had a grin on her face as she slowly bent at the waist. "I'd be careful doing that. I like being spanked remember."

Taylor laughed and swatted her friend on the ass several more times. "Just warming things up more," she whispered as her eyes took in the light red handprints on her friend's ass.

Karen straightened up and continued to walk. "I think you're loosening up quite nicely."

"Not really. Right now, everything is clenched up rather tightly."

Karen chuckled and stopped as she reached their chairs. "Spankings will do that."

"Spankings are the least of it. Running around naked, getting molested by a friend and a stranger, more running around naked. Thoughts of three people on a blanket. Thoughts of you masturbating." Taylor paused to groan softly. "Thoughts of me masturbating next to you."

Karen laughed as she bent over the ice chest and opened it. She pulled out two beers and opened them. As she handed one to her friend, she winked. "Yeah, earlier you wouldn't have mentioned any of that. Thought about it but...."

Taylor took a long pull on the ice cold beer and shivered as she turned the bottle down. She let out a long loud belch and grinned. "So we're bonding better out here than we ever have anywhere else."

"Being naked drops a lot of the barriers, so to speak." Karen replied as she moved over to her chair and straddled it. She sat down but kept her feet on the sand.

Taylor grinned as she moved to her chair and sat down the same way. "I'll race ya."

Karen laughed and pressed the cold bottle to her right breast and rolled it around. "Hell no! I'm going to come quickly the first time and then I'm going to enjoy the second one even more."

Taylor shivered as she watched the cold bottle make Karen's big nipple get even bigger and harder. "When you start on the third one, I want to suck on your nipples."

Karen groaned softly. "Three is pushing it but with incentive like that...."

Taylor took another long drink of her beer and sat the bottle on the sand next to her chair. Her cold right hand came up to cup her right breast. She shivered hard and smiled. "Let the games begin," she whispered as her left hand moved down her stomach toward her sex.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

This was a great story,I gave it a 5*, I love the style and flow. As far as grim is concerned, I do believe there is a lesbian category so it wouldn't go into the gay section anyway it would go there. This story has to continue, you have tons of room to grow with having Karen, Taylor, laurel, the other girls, and even the two guys. Pick up right where you left off.

TJSkywindTJSkywindover 7 years ago
Very nice

Don't usually browse this category, but I was on my tablet today and clicked on the Lit app for new stories.

A gentle and pleasant way for us to enjoy the first-time "Taylor" made sandwich. The way they are presented, Karen and Taylor might have a strong preference for guys, but they might do a little more exploration with each other not because they are attracted to other girls but because the other woman is their best friend and they are both having a dry spell.

I think it's copping a feel, though both seemed to be struggling with coping with their copping each other. Thank you for your usual, excellent writing. 5*

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Thought ....

Thought it was very interesting and kept me reading the story until the very end plus I did give it a "5" !

Ole { Grim } would of liked it it if it had been 2 guy's instead of 'Ladies' - - I'll bet you a dollar to a donut..!** LOL Go get'um Grim..! hehe

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Another one of your well written, explicit and thoroughly enjoyable stories. Not what I expected with the "First Time" category, but well worth the long read. Forget about re-categorizing; give the readers a different "First Time" experience.

Good, playful discussion of the feelings of the characters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Rainbow Creek.

This is one of the best stories I have read in a long time. It was carefree, warm, and had just enough sexual content to make it interesting without overdoing it. Just a couple of young friends out for a day of sun, fun and relaxation.

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