All Comments on 'Ransom'

by TarnishedPenny

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
GREAT START

I would like to see this tale continued

rayironyrayironyalmost 4 years ago
Gratifying contrasts, good writing

A minuscule grouse;

in the 2nd to the last line it should read "tail" rather than "talk"

oldpantythiefoldpantythiefalmost 4 years ago
Two fer one!!

Great story! Very well written and easy to follow. The intro was very interesting how you made things work to the point of the story. Almost sounds like the COVID19 and the violence going on now. Just hope we don't progress now as they did in the story, I'm not ready for the nukes, lol. Still, kind of scary, just hopefully not prophetic.

Again, well done and thanks

BiologoBiologoalmost 3 years ago

Delayed gratification was worth waiting for, made easy by great storytelling and commentary on the human condition.

I think “hoarded” not “horded” was what you meant early on:

“ …smuggle a carefully-horded ex-Soviet nuke…”

TarnishedPennyTarnishedPennyalmost 3 years agoAuthor

Biologo - Oops, quite right. Thanks and thanks for you your comment in general.

Thors_FistThors_Fistalmost 3 years ago

Exceptionally well written story. Very interesting with great dialog. I'll take a look at another couple of your works, but I'm thinking you're going to become a favorite author.

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