All Comments on 'Ransom'

Wow i think im gonna love Dominic . Such a good start. Keep it up 😊

Great start, please continue.

Wonderful begining, please continue!

Excellent story, well written with interesting, well drawn characters. Please continue!

Please continue writing

Good start and definitely waiting on the next chapter.

More more more!!

I'm interested to see this story progress! Its been a while where a story has captured my interest. :-)

I'm intrigued....!

Kailee is such a rubbish, common name?! Like really, out of all the nice names, you pick Kailee, urgh.

Thankyou for the wonderful feedback so far, I've got a weekend of writing ahead of me! Apologies to the anon who doesn't like my name choice - can't please everyone I guess :) hope you still liked the story regardless.

I'll keep an eye out for the next ch.

Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for sharing.

You've got me hooked, a great start to the story!!

Love it

I can't wait to read more!!!!

The story is well structured and believable. If I were not in this particular genre of "non consent," I'd think we were heading to a mystery novel. I am curious to see your bridge from mystery to erotic is going to be? That probably will be the hardest thread to weave in this tale. I'm looking forward to the next installment.

Great start! Looking forward to the next chapters.

Characters to hiss, characters with room for growth , action and fierce wills - it's all here and now.

Full marks * * * * *