All Comments on 'Raping Helena'
by E.Z.Riter
- 11 Comments
Anonymousabout 15 years agoLoved it... absolutely loved it... nothing like mans primal urges to take a female and make her his...
kudos...
Poesproppieover 13 years agoI had read some of your work before when I found this on Lit I was sure it was going to be readable very well done!
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoFlow was perfect and suddenly met a cliff....serious justice needs to be done in ending a story with such a nice flow....
Anonymousover 11 years agoI just stumbled onto this, but I want the rest ot the two weeks and I want her to divorce her husband and stay his submissive
shmueltzvyover 11 years agoYour original story was a delight. Go back to it. It's not even listed here anymore. It's one of the few that I made a printed copy of.
The rewrite is nothing compared to the original.
Anonymousabout 8 years agoWell written. Do more. You must not resist the inevitable any more than Helena did.
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoVery well written however, would have liked to see him be more forceful.
Anonymousover 4 years agoThe please don't stop comment changed the tone of the story and preferred it wasn't there. More details of the rape would have better, including the penetration of the ass that was hinted at but never happened..
