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by Biggalute

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PrfsrPrfsralmost 5 years ago
Quite vs. quiet

It would behoove you to learn the difference.

Bray123Bray123almost 5 years ago

OK, but it feels like chapter 1 of many more. Typo in the 2nd para caught me.

Sirspet0619Sirspet0619almost 5 years ago
Very nice

Sometimes when I write I forget to check my writing. Silly spell check can get you every time. This was a very enjoyable story. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Cute

I love that there is a personal, real life element to this. Cute story. I wonder if "RASPBERRY NIPPLE" will ever read this! ;)

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I'm back writing and enjoying it. I'm enjoying the creative process and listening to the characters 'talk' in my head. People reading and enjoying my stories is a nice bonus. 4/1/24 Still alive and new stories coming soon, hope you enjoy