All Comments on 'raVen'

I would just like to note that this story has been whipped into shape by a very helpful editor. They'd like to remain anonymous, but it's been a pleasure working with them, and I'd like to give a big 'Thank You!'.

Gender fluidity, joy of sex, open minds and a redemption narrative! A blast of a read!

Like an erotic episode of the Twilight Zone.

:-)

...and the editing shows. Every writer should have one.

The whole story is a gem, and the (inevitable) ending is the final sparkle.

Stupid

I find this story so exciting and wish I could find a witch to transform me. Thanks so much raVan.

I have been reading some on lush and then looking at members profiels. I can not believe all the absolutly beautiful ladies in America with clitties so much larger than mine. They are absolutly wonderful, I wish I was single and dating.

Thanks everybody for the nice comments, this is very motivating! <3

That twist was so wild....I need a chiropractor!