All Comments on 'Ravenswood Ch. 11'

Most of these chapters are short and don't involving anything exciting. Longer chapters with more content please and thank you

...that chaptered stories often end up as full-fledged novels. Oh well. In exchange for reading my story for FREE I get some great feedback to help me hone the tale and improve it before it's published. It's sort of a quid-pro-quo if you will. Which is one of the reasons I encourage readers to respond after reading the chapter (short or long).

Although, registering as a full-fledged member of the reading public with Literotica and not hiding behind the mask of anonymity might be nice.

Will I remake this chapter and combine it with another to extend it? Is there enough new information given to prompt curiosity and further reading? Good questions, only time will tell. -Dreamweaver594.

Haha I like this story and am glad you are updating it regularly. The short chapters are a bit of a drag for a reader but as a writer I am sure they are less stressful and easier to get out Wich is a huge bous for us who are following you! So please continue.

I am really enjoying your writing and this story.

I don't mind the shorter chapters. I think that you are doing a good job with your character development.

I find this story to be compelling, and I am falling in love with these characters.