All Comments on 'Raw Ch. 04'

that was the most sexy story i've read in.... PHEW!!!! whoa. soooooo good! thank you for sharing this amazing story.

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just unbelievably good. dammit, i'm gonna go find my husband and show him some love *right now*. jeez!

Well, well, well Brian is a complete ass, gorgeous, but an ass nonetheless. Hey ho I had hoped he would redeem himself. But Malcolm..... what a turn up, he is a star or should I say an inferno, lucky Becca! Great chapter am pleased you have continued the story. Thanks.

Hot hot hot hot....that's all I can say right now

This is hot stuff! I read this chapter accidentally because it was listed as another author's new chapter by mistake. Another reader was able to identify it properly. So I must give credit where it is due; I looked this story up to comment properly.

This is awesome writing! Excuse me while I go enjoy more of your writing!

I rant and rail against the phenomenon of the 'magical cock,' but I begin to think that perhaps Master Malcom actually has one.... and the rest of the guy it is attached to ain't so shabby either. Sigh.

I would give you a detailed critique but it is not necessary. It is all. So. Damn. Good.

Another awesome chapter. Just wonderful. Loving Brian getting taped. Love the club. Love Master Malcolm. What an open and attentive Dom.

Thank you for a 4th chapter, looking forward to 5 and more....

5*

When I saw that Chapter 4 had been posted!!

Can't wait for Chapter 5!!

awesome chapter can't wait for 5 thanks for dropping me an email to let me know it was up. i love this story. very hot writing. keep up the good work :-)

Thanks for sending the email letting me know the story posted. Can't wait to see where you take Becca and Malcolm. I also love Drake and Daphne.

I just love the dynamics of your characters. I'm so lucky. I got behind on reading and have another chapter to go!

~LB

I was so excited to see chapter 4 and 5 posted that I reread the first 3 again! Sadly that took longer than I thought it would so I finally just read this. Love love love these characters and the story so far. On to chap. 5!

What a great evening... Brian put in his place after proving he was slime. I wish I could find someone like Malcom.. oh lord ...

Love the closeness that Becca and Malcolm are attaining since their connection started.The scenes are smokin !!!

Really this story is so perfect. One of the few where I'm like "I want a guy like that."

You have basically written a modified version of my personal story thus far. Expertly written, and definitely is a help for those who have been in Becca's position

I'm not sure how I found this story, but I'm so glad I did.

This one had me grinning throughout the whole read!! As a matter of fact, It is 6:35 a.m. And I'm still reading your writings!! I love this. You don't know how many books I've gone through where I've clutched the book and yelled out loud to the heroine! Or hero, whoever is acting like a dolt at the time. Thank you for a beautiful story!!