All Comments on 'Reacquainted Ch. 02'

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sabra16023sabra16023over 6 years ago
Another great chapter

Waiting for the next chapter. Thanks

nicho1855nicho1855over 6 years ago
Not sure.

Chapter 1 was great, but I'm not sure if I like the direction that the next chapter is heading. I guess we will just have to wait and see how it all pans out.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

if Edward actually fucks lauren (cuz now he has blackmail material) it would kind ruin the story for me. anyways looking forward to whats next

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

She is a smart intelligent woman. She will figure out how to neutralize Edward. She will bring Natalie into her Circle 3

goducks1goducks1over 6 years ago
more, please. great read.

i really like to story. but i hope we can neutralize edward as well. no blackmail. but i love this story and can't wait to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
hope

I ope the driver has a concious

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Was enjoying your story until you bought up blackmail. Blackmail is ugly and if it comes to that I wont continue reading this story or any other that has it in it.

Many_MemoriesMany_Memoriesover 6 years ago
A really good story -

too bad that "cheap ass driver" needs to be taken care of! Sounds like he is planning to wreck many things, including his own job! Is Sebastian "man" enough to eliminate the coming problem? Sure hope so! I'm waiting for the next chapter...

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
5

5 times 2! Make it 3!

boaman007boaman007over 6 years ago
I agree....

Let's have Edward out of the picture some how or at least the phone ends up in Lauren's possession and she erases the video? I really want to see them happy and getting what they both want.

sunburycdsunburycdover 6 years agoAuthor
Feedback

Thank you to those who've read and commented. To everyone with fears about where the story is headed, rest assured I'm not going to fuck over characters I enjoy writing and I love Lauren and Sebastian. 😉

happymuffinhappymuffinover 6 years ago
5 Stars

Awesome story a little to fast for me and I would like to know more about Sebi. but I get where you going. I also agree with the others that the Driver should be handled cruelly for thinking of blackmailing

ilimitadoilimitadoover 6 years ago
Shot your wad in part 1

Mediocre ad best. Stop writing about this line of reasoning. Ch. 01 was a 5* fully, I gave this a 4* but was being generous. The last part...of the driver and video...is crap. STOP WRITING.

goducks1goducks1over 6 years ago
how to off edward

its simple - sebastian calls his phone while lauren is being driven by edward to work, she notices it and reclaims it from edward. then edward takes the car to be washed, and while looking at his phone while driving veers into the oncoming lane, gets hit by a rather large lorry and wham - dead instantly. well deserved!!!

sswillowsswillowover 6 years ago
Ignore naysayers

Ever notice that the people who don't write these stories make the rudest comments? They know nothing of the efforts made to bring these stories to life.

Do keep going and good luck.

sunburycdsunburycdover 6 years agoAuthor
good with the bad

Thanks again for commenting. goducks, I like your suggestion and sswillow, I figure you're never as good as people say you are and you're never as bad as people say you are. Thanks for the kind words.

jme51usajme51usaover 6 years ago
Just keep going

Outsmart the Driver at his own game. Is he loyal or a smuck. Use that. I love the story line. Awesome.

TongueHungTongueHungabout 6 years ago
Chapter 3

Coming soon I hope? Got an ETA?

auberge1auberge1about 6 years ago

Please, please, please... don’t go down a dark road with the chauffeur.

Mom and son reacquainted...

Your story... my opinion.

Please keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
re:Ignore naysayers

Which one should you ignore, the people who comment on the story or the one who comments on them for daring to have a different opinion?

blackknight314blackknight314over 4 years ago
I love it.

Far be it for me to tell you how or what to write. Enjoying it. Thanks, for sharing.

BL4D3R1D3RBL4D3R1D3Rover 4 years ago
Fab

Love the thought of her walking round in cummy panties

GeorgeGaleGeorgeGaleabout 2 years ago

Ummmm I don't like the way this is going. Bring it back on track..........():\

TEXASMADDOGTEXASMADDOGover 1 year ago

This is JUST the kind of story I love to read...much emotional connection going on here, between Lauren and Sebastian...gets better & better!

Edward, on the other hand...he is a problem that needs "taking care of"...and soon. Violating Lauren's confidence like that, over some MONEY??!! He should know that loyalty is rewarded, without resorting to deceit or blackmail/selling photos to the highest bidder!! I do like "goducks" solution from 5 years ago!.

I also must tell you to ignore the naysayers...this IS your story, to tell how you will; if someone does not like it, go read something else, & leave the rest of us to enjoy a superb tale!!

Five**5**Stars...most definitely deserved!!

nippelfansmall2nippelfansmall2over 1 year ago

To be honest, he should be more conflicted and angry at her..

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Still very nice 5 stars !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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