by R410a
The ending seemed a little rushed, but that was only because I had become so invested in the characters. Thank you for sharing this wonderful tale!
Another great story. You deserve the time off, but I will be awaiting your return.
Your comment about raising a child that is not your's biologically really hit home for me. I was adopted by the most loving parents in the world. I was always treated as a natural child as was my sister. Amazingly, my parents then had two "natural" children and we were all loved equally.
Thank you.
It's hard coming up with words to describe how much I enjoy your stories, so ill just say awesome.
Too bad not all men don’t realize that all a child wants is someone to love them. That which is freely given will be returned ten times
Thanks for the story, R410a. Sorry to see it end but then all good things must. Take a break, enjoy the family and we will see you when you return bright eyed, bushy tailed and full of pea and vinegar!
Cheers
SAGE
I always enjoy your stories but everybody deserves some time off. Have a great summer!
You are 100% right any male can make a child but it's a loving careing man to be a father.
p.s. I raised my daughter who's biological father left without ever meeting her. She was raised with 3 full siblings no such thing as half people.
Was a gret story until the drama of Elaiyna and her pathetic family, her mother and the bitch not wanting to have sex with her husband with her mother around!!! SPEAK ABOUT BAGGAGE!!!
I enjoy your work. Good story. I have noticed you like long dating periods before the physical. It seems slightly contrived. The I'm gonna blow your socks off someday, when I am ready. Seems a little Manipulative. And do couples really compare current lovers to ex-s while in bed? Last thing I would want to know is that my spouse was thinking about old loves, even if I came off better in the comparison. Seems to be common dialog with many authors. Good work .