by FantasyFisher
I think I'm as frustrated as Dylan that nothing happened... yet.
Awesome. Thank you!
You're doing a great job on these, and unlike everyone else., no, the pace does not need to be picked up. This is a very slow seduction, and that's fine. Hopefully, you've got a few more chapters about ready to go. I can't wait for the chapter two, three, four chapters in the future when they somehow have to lose Clive because and Dylan has to go because one of the big clients is going, too, or some such. Looks like next chapter Dylan should end up getting SOME relief, finally.
Just awesome! I love the way you are developing the characters of Julie and Dylan. Unlike some of the other stories mom doesn’t fall on her knees giving her well endowed son a blowjob by the third paragraph
Venus
I can't wait for them to become one! It would be nice if the father could find a really nice female fushing buddy, and fall in love with her. Thanks for the story, it's my favorite one to date.
I normally don't go for the Incest stories but I'm totally hooked on this story. So well written and erotic. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Nice, I'll give to Dylan that dude is determined to crack her for sure. So many opportunities now opened up with the dating play. Superb
A good story! I hope you’ll continue with the story. We need to know what happens between mother & son.
I love this series. I share everyone's frustration. Personal bias, I would write in that Julie is not on birth control & is also allergic to latex, so Cliff got snipped. Then I would let that be one of the barriers Dylan has to hurdle.
Thank you so much for this chapter. I never read anything beautiful as your story. Keep writing. And thank you for not rushing. I love the unwillingness of Julie and made your story very believable.
I come here every day too see if there is any update of your story. Thank you so much for the update. I am a big fan of your story.
Wow . Thank you so much for the update. I have been waiting for the chapter -6 and you did a wonderful job.
Great! Really enjoyed the slow seduction. Been looking forward to this chapter. Please continue asap!!
not quite the cliffhanger i was hoping for- he still, STILL, hasn't hooked his prize catch! She keeps wriggling free- they need to name a new WAFFLE for her at the waffle house. He has obviously been working the full court press, trying every which a way to snag her. Yes they love each other. Yes they have the hots for each other.
How are the first six chapters even under the incest/ taboo heading when there has yet to be any sex other than some hand-play? he hasn't even lost his sauce! And she hasn't gone over that cliff, either! It's been going sideways for too long and now i have a boner that won't quit, too! All kidding aside: love the story, love the incredibly slow burn. It certainly does keep one on one's toes. Thanks for writing- you do it well
Becoming beyond hot now that it’s all about the mother and her needs and to hell with the son’s future. I had no need for dating, especially ever since my mother pressed her black lace demi cup bra up against me..the seamed nylons..her dark bush..She had me totally wrapped around her little finger.
Extremely awesome. It would be super hot this comes from mom's point of view more. Keep writing 👍
Best story in literotica. Very believable. Please keep the slow phase. Love the unwillingness of Mom. You captured it so well. Thank you.
Thankyou so much for continuing this tale. One of the best erotic fiction that I have ever read on this or any other site. Keep going this is masterful.
You are a great author. Thank you so much for this beautiful story. The way you capture the inner conflict and unwillingness of Julie makes this story one of the best among all. Waiting for the next chapter
This story is incredible. The fact that they still haven't had sex is driving me crazy, but in the best possible way. The slow burn is so fucking hot. I hope it builds to him knocking her up
Wow! I've been waiting and waiting for chapter 6. This is the best erotic story I've ever read. Can't wait for the next chapter, and them fucking and saying I love you as husband and wife.
Can't wait for you to go into more detail on the cloths he bought want to see the Clive disappear and her relationship to blossom with her son can't wait for chapter 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 etc
Wonder if Cliff has any latent fantasies about giving up control, being cucked, or maybe being a sissy maid to Julie and her new husband? All kinds of possibilities exist. Or he could fall for someone who shares his love of fishing, want out of his marriage, thus freeing the new couple to ride off into the sunset in a happy ending.
Great love story. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you for listening.
Oh WOWWWW!!! What a fantastic story. Its beautifully written and well paced. Please continue. Thank you in advance.
Back and forth, back and forth. I understand her being conflicted, but on the same page she's ready to give herself over wth "full abandon", and a couple paragraphs later, It's back to "no, no more", etc etc. Six chapters of it, dozens of pages already. Well, I'm glad others are still enjoying it, but I'm done.
The beauty of this story is her inner conflict and slow phase. Just love this story . Please continue for chapter 7 and many more
Love the slow build-up, and the slow progress. Eagerly waiting for future chapters.
How long before chapters 7 6 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 come getting a little bored wating now getting to the point were ill have to start from the beginning and read all the way through
Good Story, Well written. But are they ever going to have sex. There is slow burn then there is this.
Whats the hold up on the next chapters . Keep checking I to see if anymore have been released and keep being disappointed author should give an update to when some chapters are being released. Any way suppose I'll leave it a while before I check again shame really as its truly a good story
I have followed your story from the beginning and have enjoyed very much.
It has been a little slow but good.
now that you are getting to the sex part between the Mother and Son you stopped the story
WHY????????
Please finish the story if you are unhappy with it so that we can know the ending.
THANK YOU.
2nd time reading. Love the story, the anticipation towards the climax has been building & it's now well past time for the next installment! I am into edging to increase the stimulation & added enjoyment at the finish however, this has been quite a
long while!
Ladies, gents, and others, I'm getting the sinking feeling that this is going to be one of those series that goes 6 for 6 on the H status and people are asking in 2028 when the next chapter is coming. Pity, this story had some read potential.
Great story been waiting all of july for next chapter please bring out chapter 7 soone.
I’ve been checking everyday waiting for the next chapter hopefully it comes soon.
Chapters 1-5 came out in under 2 weeks, then it was ~5 more weeks for Chapter 6.
It's coming up on 8 (and counting!) now and there's still no sign of Chapter 7...
It's not just the *plot* of this story that's proceeding at a snail's pace! 🙄🤨🤦♀️
Well maybe he's doing the history in real time so it's getting the new materials to add the next chap becouse it's taking a life to get the next fase
Poor Cliff. Such a shame that his fishing buddy passed away leaving his 35 year old widow carrying their first child. Of course Cliff felt compelled to comfort Amanda as she had no other family nearby. He started taking her fishing with him, one of her favorite activities. It was all innocent until others started questioning when ‘their’ baby was due, a boy or a girl, what were they going to name the child? Quashed early this could have been avoided. Now it is getting out of control. What next? Awaiting the next chapter…
NanoMax
Well we've all been waiting for weeks guess the story ain't going to carry on shame tbh as it was very good but the lack of response let's me think that their will not be any more
Even a tortoise is faster than the author. More than 8 weeks now since the last chapter and still no update from the author
Two months later and still waiting. I hate it when authors do this. I've now forgotten most of the story.
Poor Julie. Her realization that this second marriage is taking priority over the one with Cliff made her suddenly desperate to reconnect with him. She returned from Canada early hoping to surprise husband #1 as he returned from fishing. Waiting at the overlook point above the harbor Cliff always used, imagine her surprise when a pregnant woman exited Cliff’s boat just ahead of him. A very pregnant woman. OMG, what to do?
Awaiting the next chapter…
NanoMax
If you are still active on this site please continue this story. I'm fucking hooked.
Fuck what the naysayers say about not enough action. I love the slow-burn you are going for.
You have something special here please don't abandon it before it's through.
Excuse me but what the fuck?!?! You can’t leave people hanging that after such a long ass story. Julie needs to.give up that pussy and embrace this new life. Cliff needs to be married to his boat. Everyone wins. Now get on with my. Start typing!
Great story....it has so much potential...I'm seriously jonesing for another chapter....get your ass to work!
What a beautiful story. It was exactly my kind. Slow burning. Please continue .
The slow build on this is delicious. Very well structured, pulls the reader in. Keep up the great work.
Guess the author must have died, been abducted by space aliens, or ran out of ideas. O Well.
A well scripted story but remains inconclusive. Appreciate if you can continue with the series and release the subsequent one. Thanks and keep it up.
This has potential to be one of the best stories ever written on here. Bring it home Fantasyfisher!