by Colleen Thomas
Loved the characters, related well to their growth and their lives.
As a cripple, though in other areas, I thoroughly enjoyed this story.
You caught the emotions of someone forced outside wonderfully.
Both characters were full and rich, very well drawn.
The build up was was wonderful and made the climax the more satisfying for that.
A wonderful piece of work, Colleen. Well done.
Have You Ever Written Anything That Wasn't Perfect? Thank You For Your Work! TomJ
You've taken a topic which could be awkward or excessively sentimental in another writer's hand, and handled it masterfully. This kept my attention from start to finish, and is one of your most polished efforts. I am in awe of your considerable talent...
As always you have created something of amazing beauty. Reading this braught tears to my eyes. I am a huge fan of your work, and have read all of your stories so far. Your writing is an inspiration to anyone who wants to be a writer, no matter the Genre.
This is why I recommend you to anyone who wants to read top-notch lesbian erotica. This was just romantic enough, just tender enough, just sensuous enough and just real enough to make it just perfect enough.
You & a handfull of other literotica authors prove there is still hope for lesbian erotica because for every 10 you read that are just smutt once in a while you find a gem. thx
I was entranced. many times, I spend at least a few seconds wondering if I should keep reading, or just move on. That never occured to me this time. Thank you Miss Colly.
I was entranced. many times, I spend at least a few seconds wondering if I should keep reading, or just move on. That never occured to me this time. Thank you Miss Colly.
Are you completely out of your mind? I read both stories, curiosity got the best of me, and Coleen's story is nothing like the other one. Both stories are excellent, both authors fantastic and very very talented. The only simularities I could find is the straight and gay side of it.
Colleen, fantastic, wonderful, beautiful as your stories always are. Definitely deserving a higher score than just a five.
The term "Myoelectric" as applied to prosthetics refers to upper extremity prosthetics. There are computer assisted lower extremity prosthetics for above the knee amputees, the most common is the "C-leg". At 40k to 60k they are generally the leg of choice and if you had one you would wear it, not keep it in a box. There were quite a number of technical errors, perhaps you should have written about an upper extremity amputee since you know one and use your friend to help with the details
I hope you accept this criticism as constructive, as your story was generally good but mistakes on technical issues really spoil the story for me.
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please never stop writing because u are an amazing author and we only recieve such beauty and talent ever so often
you handled the emotional fallout beautifully. enjoyed the story n look forward to more from you!
Great story! I got so into it because the way you write is so real and believable. You're a fantastic writer, please keep writing. Thank you. I was sad when the story was over.
Both women changed during this story, and it was done with absolute perfection, as usual. My only regret is that I never had a chance to let Ms. Thomas know how much I love her stories. ~ L
Your story brought back wonderful memories of times spent with my partner. She was a below knee amputee (left leg). I lost her almost two years ago when she was 61 and she died of a heart attack Sept. 2012.
as a minor amputee (fingers) well done,I wish I could have let Colleen know have much this story affected me
I love you writing it's so different and out there!!!! Keep up the good work can't wait for you to write more!!!!!
I can read this story over and over and over and ...
After I thought that I had read all of Coleen Thomas works many years ago.
So, it was like finding old precious wine unexpectedly in your back yard.
It was very well written, sensitive as hell, and very convincing.
I loved the characters, their weaknesses and flaws, and the sex scene was beautifully orchestrated.
An upscale restaurant that puts a red wine on ice? No. Doesn't happen. Red wine is served at room temperature, *especially* if it's "the good stuff".
Is why nobody likes wine drinkers. It's an awful lot of pretension required just to drink rotten grape juice. 😋
I love this story so much!!!
Thank you for such a heart touching storie.
And yes as you has been discovered for yourself with your friend a tremendous changing in life is hard to live with.
But let me say it with the beatles "with a little help from ...."
Thank you
Always loved a beautiful love story between two beautiful women who both found true love that only patience could've set the classic moment of a romantic relationship. Great story.