All Comments on 'Red-faced on the Red-eye Pt. 02 - Sunburn'

Very very good. It was really hard to wait for part 2. Still hoping there will be more to come

Thanks for sharing

I want to see the next chapter. That was a five star hot story. I know it hints at Rosie being turned on by the idea of Anna dominating her too but I wonder if secretly what really turns Rosie on is the thought of talking Anna's place as Sara's mistress.

I absolutely love the dynamic between Anna and Sara that you have created. You are a very good writer, and I'm looking forward to reading more!

I hope Anna makes a return for chapter 3, the way she exudes presence and control over Sara is brilliant, such a fun character. The beach scene with them was sexy, Sara was lost in her own world as Anna played her. Thank you for the mental picture of that dress. Can't wait for Sara punishment and hopefully at the hand of Anna.

Thank you

Love the story, but it could be a little less « public ».

Great story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

An awesome tale, waiting for the next chapter.

Going to be honest, I thought part 1 was the better so far, that being said, this was still a good story.

it is going to be interesting to see what happens next.

One of the best I have read here. The writing was well done as was the editing (only noticed a few mis-spellings/mis-placed words, etc; none of which detracted from the tale.) I loved the situations and the realizations that Sara was appreciative of Anna's efforts so quickly. While it was all forced upon her, it really wasn't. You have a knack for the controlling aspect of this. I can't wait to see the punishment(s). And I look forward to the flight home after their days in the islands. Thanks ever so much for spending your time to write and publish these parts and please continue with many more.

I am hoping to see more from Rosie, have Anna maybe start to draw her in! Can't wait to see what Sara's punishment is! I can imagine a lot! Thanks for a great read!!

Love this story!

Would be delicious is Rosie opened up a bit more to Sara (and Anna) on a bi-sexual level.

Also love to see if they can get Juan to join in on the fun :)

So many possibilities, can't wait to read what you come up with!

Another great episode of this delightful tormenting and wildly erotic story. Love it XXX

Great story. Love the erotic situations in both part 1 and 2.

Hope the next part follows soon.

Can not wait for part 3. I love the situations and the way boundries are oushed!

Story started out good but became repetitive & boring. First two chapters could have been done in two pages

Needs MUCH more tickling. Hopefully that’s her punishment.

Oh God ! Please continue .. Beg you to .. please !!

Both the girls take the same flight back with anna on the plane working and having fun getting them naked but at the end she only gives back one dress for the girls to share off the plane

Great addition to the tale. Please continue. We need to see Rosie fall to dominant pussy too.

Anna got Rosie under her thumb with the clothing bet, use that power. Anna can make Rosie dole out Sara's punishment, and doing so will turn Rosie on so much that she caves to Anna's will sexually.

Yes! Yes! Yes! Continue this story! Rosie needs her moment. I want to be Rosie! Please! This is so hot!

Please! I really need to know what Sara’s punishment is going to be. I’ve been reading this un public and I’m so wet

I need more of this story as bad as Sara needs Anna. Please continue. I have to know what happens next. What will be Sara's punishment? Will Rosie submit? Will Sara ever get her clothes back? You can't leave us hanging.

This is so good you neeeeeeeed to write more I’m dying!!! DYINGGGGG

This is one of the best stories I've read on here in the past 5 years! Thank you!

Very sexy story keep up the fabulous writing. I can not wait for Rosie to get involved. What will they wear to town for dinner? Who will get to shave Rosie? Does Anna ever get embarrassed? How does she get her comuppance? And parts 3 and beyond

in addition to revealing Sara's punishment obviously the stage has been set for Rosie to also become a naked sex toy

I love the story so far. I myself have exhibitionistic tendencies and the desire for some public humiliation so this is right up my alley! I think it's been a whirlwind read and want more!

Love this story line! More please!!!!

I have cum 3 times in public at work to this story! No one has caught me....yet!

I’m a male who would love to be dominated and exposed by a beautiful woman. I have had this happen several times and loved it😀

I have not been so enthralled, so wanting of more from a story in so long, I very very much hope you continue this masterpiece. God its good.

So many stories are very predictable. This one has had some unique turns!

Can't wait to find what goes on next!!

I really loved this. Really really loved this. It’s one of my favorites on here now. I hope you haven’t abandoned it.

AMAZING STORY! It would be interesting to see Juan work with Anna to make Rosie submit....

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please tell us you are working on part 3

wow, just wow! instant favorite. can’t wait for more! hopefully sara succumbs completely to anna in every way possible. ;)

There's just a woman to offer us eroticism of this sensuality. I would like to be a young woman and be introduced to the pleasures by you. I give 5 stars.

Ive been reading these stories for research. Never thought of gay stuff as hot but this is cool. 5 stars. No public nudity for me though

Wow, I have been waiting for a really great story like this for a long time and you nailed it. Keep going.

This was amazing, I haven't read an exibition story anywhere near as good as this for quite a while. It helps that it is well written, has an interesting and unexpected plot, and hits some of my other kinks (humiliation, training, consensual non-consent and domination). I hope you can find the time to write more sometime!

I am so caught up in your well crafted and well written story. It is so easy to put myself in Sara's place and to thoroughly enjoy the control by Anna. I don't care if Rosie gets dick, I care very much about what happens next with Anna and Sara!

it's.... wow. your work is masterful. Thank you

Seriously loving every moment with Sara and can't wait to see where and how Anna will strike next, and to see how long Rosie can hold out against her own urges!

I like it !

The public masturbation and the whole domination part are indeed very well written.

I think Rosie submitting to Anna would make an interesting continuation.

Very well written. Enjoyed how you took time to explore Sara’s self awareness. Enjoying the tension with Rosie. Can’t wait for part 3!

loved it. hot and so sweet and wholesome :.). so excited to see punishment, keep it coming plz

Great story. Exciting and titillating. On edge of my seat waiting for what comes next. Really looking forward to Part 3. Hopefully very soon.

Great story, love the build up!

Not as great as the first one, but still really good. A worthy continuation.

Fantastic! More! More! More!

Enjoyed it but fell a bit short of part 1. I think my main problem was in regards to what is going on with the island and it's rules. Anna made a different girl run tarmac nude, yet public nudity is illegal on the island. Sara was 'ok' with the cover of night in the plane but now is fine with multiple orgasms on the private beach. Rosie offers so many interesting options regarding where to go but also seems to not add to the story progression at least in this part.

Some lovely story twists with now both girls extremely naked and a Lesbian temptress to answer. Hopefully for the whole week and the flight home . He he he

Ok comment on the story, it's hot

Gotta have more of it. Hopefully Anna can get Rosie to loosen up

Thank you for continuing this amazing story!!!