All Comments on 'Red Fishnet Bodysuit Ch. 01'

Keep bringing it up about how good it would be to have three guys fucking her, and then start with real names of guys.After a while tell her he could set it up to have her get real cock in her. have her get all fixed up and in a sexy night gown, then have a couple of guys over and fuck her good

loose the multiple letters, it detracts from the story. No, I'm serious.

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Not too bad but there is too much repetition of "... you'd like one in your pussy and another in your mouth, wouldn't you?" etc. It would benefit greatly from some heavy editing. 4 out of 5

I liked it but put off by silly use of "sexy" response sounds. We know what you mean. Just write the story.

One over used line in your story sums up my reaction perfectly. Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuggghhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

The story is ace, in my opinion but I was disappointed that, while Jay was constantly telling her over and over that she would like these things, not once did he demand that she says it or asks him to do it