by PrevertedMe
i just love how this particular husband seduced his wife into fucking other men good job ...keep it up
Good writing. Not a strook story for me. Just interesting..... Then here I find commenting.. Nazi sick patrol. They are complaining about your story and you when they are the sick ones for reading a story they say is sick when they know what they are reading!!! Poor little boys can't stand to have people write what they just have to read!!
You say the same thing way too many times and you drag the story out also. In my opinion, the story would be much better if it were much shorter (and well edited). This goes for the other chapters also.