All Comments on 'Red Heart Diary'

throughly enjoyed the story,,,

can we have a follow on chapter of this one?

Want the next chapter. Love the details.

This was one gem of a story. I don't think continuing it at this point would be sensible. Its a beautiful story.

I really liked the way you wrote this story--well above the usual babysitter tale. Romantic and erotic through and through. Thank you.

Being an older guy myself, I really was 'there' with Jeff. And I agree with the other feedback: Yummy! And old cars, too! What more could a guy ask?

sweet, romantic, just the perfect blend.......great writing

Huggs and kisses

Robin

Well done Green_Gem if this doesn't win the contest then all you reader should be ashamed of yourselfs.

Hot, romantic and cleverly funny. Much more realistic than "Amsterdamned"(I live near the part of Amsterdam you described there.)

Great story, effortless story-telling, beautifully written!

I really liked this story, especially the surprise ending. I don't think it should be listed as mature, though, although I don't know just how old Jeff is.

Thank you for all the wonderful public comments, the votes and the great feedback. I appreciate your support and encouragement

Green_Gem

Another fantastic job by my favorite writer! I loved everything about this very erotic story...the set-up, character developemnt, vivid descriptions, nuances, surprise ending, and oh yeah..the SEX, which was explosive, capturing every older guy's fantasy (mine anyway).

Gren Gem is my favorite author! Her words always seem real to life, yet straight out of my fantsies! She always has me stiff and throbbing in short order, what a wonderful woman, and author!

Very well written story and with a lovely twist...Kept me reading and ... I never guessed the end.

Luved It!!!

What a great story! Tightly written, novel and with a great little twist at the end....Nice build up. I thoroughly enjoyed this Valentine's Tale.

Thanks for another wonderful story. I just love your easy going writing style! The plot was great, and could have led anywhere... but I loved that twist!!

Very erotic, beautiful writing and 'felt' good.

THIS IS A GREAT ALL AROUND OPEN MINDED WRITER,I'M NEW HERE AND HAVE EMAILED HER AND FOUND HER TO BE HONEST AND A GREAT PERSON.

THANKS FOR THE WELCOME GRREN GEM.

LOTALUST

I don't know how you do it, GG, but you just elucidated another one of my fantasies and one that I might add so close to one of my realities...

But as YOU say, THAT's another story <g>

Ok, so I had to go back and read this one several times...it's STILL the best! What a terrific writer! You gotta love the way she thinks...her smooth natural writing style, her subtle twists of plot, the nuances that make her stories all so real...Thank you, lovely writer, for sharing your most intimate thoughts with the world!

Would that I could write like this. Green_Gem manages to create with a seemingly effortless flair another story that not only titilates and excites through its economical story-telling, but does it in a way that's exceedingly satisfying both to the "porn" hound and to the "erotica" lover in me. Very very nice work.

seduction at it's finest. a very fine job of storytelling...told at a measured pace by a master weaver. easy to read...realistic characters, great passion, hot sex, fine twist ending. as a man who has been seduced & outsmarted by women all his life, it was very enjoyable.

thanks.

Super story by a super writer. Green_Gem just might be the best writer at Literotica!

He: Nearly divorced and definitely eligible. She: Hot for him and wanting more. A college-attending babysitter that obviously would like to have his babies, and would probably gladly drop out of classes to become a mommy and wife to take care of more babies. A highly erotic possible story with a great basis for continuation. Well written.

Well-written, interesting storyline, and the perfect ending. This writer is VERY good! I look forward to reading more from Green_Gem.

This woman can write a story that would "make a dead man come" to quote Mick Jagger! Man, I've only read three of hers to date, and I'm hooked...The writer has a great writing style, skillful use of words and imagery.Wowser.Who needs viagra, just read one of these!Thanks for sharing your gift of writing and fantasies!

I can not match your own words to describe my feelings after reading this story "A smug grin lit up her face. "Well a girl's got to do what she can to get her Valentine, and when you finally got the hint, you just shot forward like an arrow into my quivering heart."

You are the girl that truly did what it took to get my attention and aplause. Thank You for a great story.

You put forth in words ideas and fantasy that most of us can only dream of.

The way you write is incredible. Until i read your biography i thought you were a man. It's amazing how you manage to give a male perspective.

That GREEN GEM has a great grasp of how a mans mind works is evident in this story. She also strips away the facade of hard to get women. she illustrates that women go for what they want and will do what they need to do to fuck the guy they're after. Great story and well written as is GG's way to write

I have read 4 of your staories toady- you have a gift for writing complete raunchy sex that makes my cum boil over. Pity you havent written more for a while. Absolutely stunning

Top stuff!

J

Hot, sexy fantasy! Perfect!

one of the best stories I've read in a while.

I know you've written this story quite a while ago, but I just found it, read it and thoroughly enjoyed it.

I've marked you as my favourite author and I'll be reading all your other stories.

Thanks

Awesome. Love your stories I hope you keep writing more.

Fucking hot. I loved this snapshot of their lives. Thanks for sharing :)

Very well written, built up a bit of suspense. I like that it reflected his doubts about separating fantasy from truth.

I agree with some other comments that it doesn't beg for a sequel, although I would surely check it out if you write it.

For that matter, I see that you have a lot of submissions, so I have a bit of reading to do.

Thanks!

T

Wonderful story, 10 stars! In a couple months, Kate calls Jeff and says, "L'm dropping out of college, as I have a job, a wife and mother. Your wife, and our daughter Allison is going to have a brother or sister in 7 months, as my husband planted his seed deep. I love you, darling!"