All Comments on 'Red Ribbons in Her Hair Ch. 04'

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Anonymousover 8 years ago

I can almost feel the rain failling

Fantastic wrting - my pulse is racing. Next chapter please :-)

Native_blue over 8 years ago

Great story. Love the storyline. Cant wait to see more chapters. 👍

mcollect over 8 years ago

So good

More please!

Anonymousover 8 years ago

Is there hope?

I hope that when the killer is caught, that Gab and Kaylee can get together. She seems safe when he is around. Maybe she should have gone to his house to begin with!

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Hey: I'm sorry about chapter two of Captive Angel being posted before chapter one. There was a paragraph or two that needed editing and I turned it back in to those who run this place. It should be out soon. Also. If there are any of my books you would like reported just tell...

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