All Comments on 'Red Ribbons in Her Hair Ch. 16'

Did not like this chapter much. A real cop, hearing sounds of a break in and knowing how dangerous David is; would grab his gun, barricade the door and call for backup.

Gabe would not have survived such an encounter with David. Poor way to advance the plot.

Contrary to what others may say, I think you did a great job. Your writing made Gabe pron to mistakes, especially when the woman he cares about is in danger, and more believable. Can't wait until the next chapter is complete.

More.

Please.

Thank you.

more more please one good story